[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wIJhSveucpw[/media]
There you go.
[QUOTE=Fish_poke;22445685][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wIJhSveucpw[/media]
There you go.[/QUOTE]
thank you :D
The voices coming from heavy and demoman are a bit loud, but it's okay I guess. There's worse.
The voices are too loud.
[QUOTE=cdBiohazard;22445878]The voices are too loud.[/QUOTE]
yeh my speakers were on their last legs when i made it so i couldnt tell thanks for the comments
saw the intro title, stopped it.
The intro title shouldn't be 15 seconds long.
Maybe 2-5 seconds. But 15 seconds is way to long.
Video was very boring as well.
You have artifacts and clipping at the bottom of the screen were you tried to greenscreen/mask.
You rushed this...
The music was definitely out of place. Music selection is one of the most important things to consider when making a film. You're music set a very serious mood when the video itself was just silly. Keep that in mind.
thanks for all the comments although they are hurtfull they are true and the main thing is to learn from my mistakes
Boring. and yeah, bad music choice.
Not funny.
Did you record the voices in game?
Dumb heavy is playing the xbox version.
You kidding? Its 7 minutes of you playing L4D2 and just standing a heavy in front of it, that was shit
You do know that you can find and download prerecorded voices from Team Fortress 2 online, right?
That was pretty boring.
[QUOTE=john_frohman;22449054]Dumb heavy is playing the xbox version.[/QUOTE]
Yeah. :(
[QUOTE=Cold Finger;22454235]You do know that you can find and download prerecorded voices from Team Fortress 2 online, right?[/QUOTE]
yeh thats what i did
your avatar is playing the music
[editline]07:00PM[/editline]
the guy with the bat is scout
nothing really going on in the video besides the screen showing l4d2 gameplay and random audio clips from heavy.. sort of boring.
ok ive heard enouth critisms for now, thanks for making me feel good about myself >:|
Whats the song, I like it.
[QUOTE=ThePunisher1;22468878]Whats the song, I like it.[/QUOTE]
First one's Eblow, Grounds For Divorce and second is scatman john, everybody jam
[QUOTE=Westyrules;22468289]ok ive heard enouth critisms for now, thanks for making me feel good about myself >:|[/QUOTE]
For pete's sake I hate it when you people over react about this stuff. Before posting something, you must realize that not everyone will enjoy it, and if they feel that the video wasted their time, they'll react negatively. As far as the comments go, no one seems to be terribly rude, everything seems constructive, or in other words, trying to help you in the future. If you can't handle negative critiques, then stop creating works. It's just one of the many obstacles in the road of personal expression.
[QUOTE=Klammyxxl;22469252]For pete's sake I hate it when you people over react about this stuff. Before posting something, you must realize that not everyone will enjoy it, and if they feel that the video wasted their time, they'll react negatively. As far as the comments go, no one seems to be terribly rude, everything seems constructive, or in other words, trying to help you in the future. If you can't handle negative critiques, then stop creating works. It's just one of the many obstacles in the road of personal expression.[/QUOTE]
When you say "everything seems constructive" i dont really thinks thats true. john_frohman said Dumb heavy is playing the xbox version. how is that going to help me make a better video? im sorry for being overreactive but im only 15 give me a break
Boring
[QUOTE=Westyrules;22469529]When you say "everything seems constructive" i dont really thinks thats true. john_frohman said Dumb heavy is playing the xbox version. how is that going to help me make a better video? im sorry for being overreactive but im only 15 give me a break[/QUOTE]
I think he was referring to how Heavy was playing the Xbox version instead of the PC. Twas a joke of sorts. And if you want to get specific with better videos, get a plot! For god's sake, I might as well be watching normal L4D2 game play. You had one camera angle the whole time, and there was no real redemption throughout the movie. I can't really even say that it was funny because of the mood the music set.
And please, never use your age as an excuse. I was making awesome shit like the below when I was 12. :c00lbert:
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wmzA2KdDX8Y[/media]
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