This first episode is a bit bare-bones but I'll try to expand on my ideas
[video=youtube;t_nJtnzxDmU]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t_nJtnzxDmU[/video]
A 30 second intro for a 3 minute video is a bit overkill tbh
Music too loud
I actully really like this idea but theres a lot of problems:
1. like Xieneus said the intro is too long and a bit overkill for a 3:20 minute video, for Youtube the shorter the intro the better, aim for something within 5 seconds.
2. Volume is a bit all over the place, the music mixes with your voice in several places and it's a bit hard to hear you.
3. Using TF2 music and then showing a CS map is a bit weird for me, also around 0:40ish the music starts playing over itself.
4. Try using a different font, generally you want to avoid using serif fonts for online content (sans serif is easier to read on a screen)
[IMG]http://maconprinting.com/media/wysiwyg/serif-san-serif.png[/IMG]
5. If you want to monetise these vids you could run into problems from using the Top Gear Theme
I think you can really make an interesting series with this but you need to work on it a bit, you actually interviewed a mapper which means you've already put in more effort then 90% of Youtube videos. Keeping working on it and I'm sure the next video will be much better.
[QUOTE=Whomobile;52691639]I actully really like this idea but theres a lot of problems:
1. like Xieneus said the intro is too long and a bit overkill for a 3:20 minute video, for Youtube the shorter the intro the better, aim for something within 5 seconds.
2. Volume is a bit all over the place, the music mixes with your voice in several places and it's a bit hard to hear you.
3. Using TF2 music and then showing a CS map is a bit weird for me, also around 0:40ish the music starts playing over itself.
4. Try using a different font, generally you want to avoid using serif fonts for online content (sans serif is easier to read on a screen)
[IMG]http://maconprinting.com/media/wysiwyg/serif-san-serif.png[/IMG]
5. If you want to monetise these vids you could run into problems from using the Top Gear Theme
I think you can really make an interesting series with this but you need to work on it a bit, you actually interviewed a mapper which means you've already put in more effort then 90% of Youtube videos. Keeping working on it and I'm sure the next video will be much better.[/QUOTE]
Thanks I really needed some feedback
It sounds like you're playing the same track twice but with the second one on a several second delay. I'm not sure if it was a mistake but it definitely is very irritating.
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