Yet another a cappella poster. I still don't feel that great about this design but I'm lacking in inspiration right now. Any suggestions are very welcome.
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It's pretty nice, but something feels a bit off. I can't pin my finger on it though. Maybe it feels a bit TOO empty? I'm not sure if that's a bad thing necessarily though. Anyways good work :P.
I like it, but I think a light-ish tan would've looked nice instead of white.
[QUOTE=Smeetin;19657291]Maybe it feels a bit TOO empty?[/QUOTE]
Bleh. Yeah, it used to feel too crammed, so I removed some stuff and now it does seem too empty. Annoying...
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[QUOTE=Morganman;19658494]I like it, but I think a light-ish tan would've looked nice instead of white.[/QUOTE]
Thanks. That does look better.
It kinda looks like the hawk is crapping out notes instead of riding on them.
[QUOTE=mynames2long;19661094]It kinda looks like the hawk is crapping out notes instead of riding on them.[/QUOTE]
haur huh ha, so funy!!! xD
I like it, it gets the job done and looks good doing it.
Only thing I would change is to enlarge the image to fit the entire canvas, theres some clipping on a few notes.
[QUOTE=Tugger;19664391]I like it, it gets the job done and looks good doing it.
Only thing I would change is to enlarge the image to fit the entire canvas, theres some clipping on a few notes.[/QUOTE]
I think that's just because of the way imageshack views it. There isn't actually a border.
I think the depth of the poster is lacking. It's kind of hard of distinguish between title, body, and images, which makes the whole feels clogged and messy a little bit.
Hard to pick up the main message, in other words.
Pretty good, regardless ^^.
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