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I haven't ever recorded anything, i just enjoy writing lyrics :D
tell me if you can improve anything and if you don't like rap/hip-hop... don't complain
here's the instrumental i used : [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRziQRD6ko4[/url]
and i tried it with this one: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smBJZ-X7YzI[/url])
p.s. i don't ever do chorus'
Lyrics:
You know, i could come so cold, that winter wouldn't like me
or i could make summer fall under my spring
but as a matter of fact, i'm fresh, so that stuff is unlikely
but to you and me, it doesn't mean a thing
if i were to present my future, you would rather have my past
fun times, deadly devine, full of merry gold and shiny laughs
supposed to be my fury, but now my rap elegence
that got people laughing, crying, fighting for the hell of it
i rally up, with a mood so calm
laying down so many murders, they regard me as the somme
excuse my french, my mere resident resides in my own peace
forget the three fates, i'm hercules,
murking the beat
but yet these, people laugh
seem to snicker in my path
so when it come to bars, i'm a martian
but the fake remain, polluting the rap game,
so really all i ever have to usher is a caution
but that's too serious, lemme get light-hearted
been fly since i started, birth that is
so damn fly that even the crane couldn't catch my drift
as i suddenly flew, even the wind blew
because he knew what i could do
people say why leave? your lyrics won't be missed though
write sins, not tragedies and envoke panic at the disco
and they fall, my dragonballs, do not any catch Z's at all
even my parent's knew that i could rap before i could crawl
but yet i'm quite lazy although i stay playing
the instrumental, and my mind tends to turn super sayan
my lyrics indepth in saying, how i can turn peoples eyes,
when i kick, push, coast, leaving myself in the sunrise
and you know the sunrise, the source of my energy
understand that it equals the MC i am meant to be
but yeah i'm squared, stuck in my cube
and my physical position is leaving me confused
but exit elegance, introduce the rage
as the hip-hop fury lets me exit this cage.
I'm not a particular fan of rap, but that's some nice work you did there :D
I am liking it, you should record.
[QUOTE=CMB Unit 01;15922686]I'm not a particular fan of rap, but that's some nice work you did there :D[/QUOTE]
thanks :D nice to know that i've heightened someones opinion on the genre?
It's not music I'd listen to, but yeah, I like what you've done.
Yeah, I can relate to what you're doing. Just writing rhymes, all creative and stuff. It's not bad at all, in fact I think you're better than me. What I usually do is just freestyles, you know. Inspired by the music I listen to, and sometimes I nick a rhyme to kick myself off. Something like;
I'm hanging round downtown it's like East Detroit,
On stakes and poles, people think that I'm a Beastie Boy,
But I don't give a fuck, it's like just swing over a rock,
And just smoke it 'til you black out and forgot where you'd hold it,
Loan Sharks on my door the other day, asking me whether or not I was gonna pay,
And I told I'd be right back with the hallucinogen,
They said 'okay', but then 'wait, what did you say again?',
Then I kicked down the door and was like 'bitches what you say? I got nines in my panties and bombs strapped, I'm gay!'
The sharks began punching me like they had nothing to live for, and I screamed 'Oh god no, not my peptic ulcer it is so sore!'
Then they aimed at my stomach as I pulled out my niner,
I shot up behind her and slapped her til she was blinder,
than I was last time I had valium in my IV,
And then the other two rushed me and said 'You're down for good, Sofie!'
and they pulled off my pink panties and I stood there naked,
My micropenis raging erection left them veiny,
and shocked as I drop-kicked the window in the hall,
and dived for my car but I missed, crushed my skull and now I'm gone.
I don't mean to hijack your thread, just thought I'd put some out so you could compare your own stuff to other's :D
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