• Flesh - Short Zombie Series made by me.
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It's really experimental, nothing even close professional. Inspired by The Walking Dead. [video=youtube;iFv6c0-mjf8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFv6c0-mjf8[/video] EDIT: Removed the actual first episode due it being a... well a quite of a failure. Hope the teaser is better. I don't honestly know what you people find good and how much it takes, but I haven't done short movies ever, at least zombie related ones.
I feel like shit for this but here's some things you can improve on: Minecraft sounds Fingering the camera Bad acting Fade cuts Boring camera angles Shots are too long Drags on too much Music cuts off suddenly
[QUOTE=Dog;36087978]I feel like shit for this but here's some things you can improve on: Minecraft sounds Fingering the camera Bad acting Fade cuts Boring camera angles Shots are too long Drags on too much Music cuts off suddenly[/QUOTE] Those are not Minecraft sounds. Fingering the camera? I'm not sure what you mean, but okay I'll try not to do that. It's my friend and she is a good actor, I don't really see what's wrong with it. What's wrong with them? Well, depends on the reviewer. I know. Well yeah, a little. Hmm, yeah. Thank you for reviewing.
She stabbed him in the face! It looked so real anyway...
[QUOTE=Dog;36087978]I feel like shit for this but here's some things you can improve on: Minecraft sounds Fingering the camera Bad acting Fade cuts Boring camera angles Shots are too long Drags on too much Music cuts off suddenly[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=OZPruduction;36090541]She stabbed him in the face! It looked so real anyway...[/QUOTE] It's hard to really produce something like a realistic head stabbing without expensive SFX.
I would say give up or rename it girl walks through woods.
[QUOTE=SlayerFin;36089597]Those are not Minecraft sounds. Fingering the camera? I'm not sure what you mean, but okay I'll try not to do that. It's my friend and she is a good actor, I don't really see what's wrong with it. What's wrong with them? Well, depends on the reviewer. I know. Well yeah, a little. Hmm, yeah. Thank you for reviewing.[/QUOTE] He meant the Minecraft-ish music in the beginning. It was so offsetting I couldn't even get past that part, but I honestly don't think it got any better after that.
hmm....looks more like a test than an actual episode to a series. The first three minutes were plain boring and unnecessary, you basically just shown a forest and a girl waking through it. I advise you to at least create a better atmosphere using more creative camera angles, better lighting/color correction and so on...just to make it visually interesting. The zombie fight was funny though. The zombie sounds weren't in synch with his mouth, he wasn't even moving it. You could have at least tried. The knife to the head was really unrealistic (and you forgot to put blood on the knife). If this is your first video, not bad. Mine were far worse. [QUOTE=SlayerFin;36089597]Th It's my friend and she is a good actor, I don't really see what's wrong with it.[/QUOTE] Well, her reaction to the zombie didn't seem realistic at all. It looked too forced and not authentic. [QUOTE=SlayerFin;36090849]It's hard to really produce something like a realistic head stabbing without expensive SFX.[/QUOTE] If you can't do something, you don't. Try something else. You could have easily made a scene in which she smashed his head with a rock, punched/kicked/shot him. Stabbing the face, and actually showing the face to knife contact in a shot will turn out bad if you don't have any gear or stuff to make it look real.
it was all just "meh" not really good but not bad either, easily something i would pass on watching i guess you should add more characters and a story, i know this is supposed to be a short but it was pretty forgetable
Episode Two teaser is here, I think you like it better than last one. Just a reminder, this is a short series, not a short film. [video=youtube;iFv6c0-mjf8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFv6c0-mjf8&list=UUA4595jF7DnueRf2cOVbEFA&index=1&feature=plcp[/video]
take the top off that one blonde chick
[QUOTE=Laferio;36092024]take the top off that one blonde chick[/QUOTE] This teaser shows what happened before episode one.
Odd request but could you upload the raw footage? I could give it a shot on the editing to see if i can go into a certain direction with it. (Got a exploding library of sound effects and horror movie OST for example)
I just removed the raw footage of that teaser, I'm sorry, would been nice to see what you would have done to it. On the other news, I might remake episode one, as it was a complete mistake.
[QUOTE=SlayerFin;36092288]I just removed the raw footage of that teaser, I'm sorry, would been nice to see what you would have done to it. On the other news, I might remake episode one, as it was a complete mistake.[/QUOTE] Well if you got some footage, i would love to mess around with it. I will make an attempt with the footage from the YouTube video
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