Outlast Noir 4 -SmoothFranko - General

[video=youtube;Q-Mr14JnxIg]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q-Mr14JnxIg[/video] Love some feedback on my work ;)

Well... You're persistent.

I really think you need a better voice actor.

I'm actually pretty interested in this series... But yeah, I'd get a friend or something to do the voice.

Your comedy is actually really quite good. I don't mind the voice acting, as long as its not irritating then its alright by me. Good job.

[QUOTE=Brt5470;43607441]Well... You're persistent.[/QUOTE] Not sure if good or bad? :) [editline]23rd January 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Live2becool;43608828]I really think you need a better voice actor.[/QUOTE] I would love to get someone who Actully has ecperiance, can you recommend anyone? [editline]23rd January 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Blazedol;43610403]I'm actually pretty interested in this series... But yeah, I'd get a friend or something to do the voice.[/QUOTE] I'm glad your enjoying it so far, had a lot of fun making it. Although none of my friends really have any VA experiance. [editline]23rd January 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Mr cake fingers;43610784]Your comedy is actually really quite good. I don't mind the voice acting, as long as its not irritating then its alright by me. Good job.[/QUOTE] Thanks! It's always nice to get some positive feedback :)

[QUOTE=Grimleyblack;43639729]Not sure if good or bad? :) [/QUOTE] Bad

[QUOTE=residualgrub;43643968]Bad[/QUOTE] Well at least he's honest :)

I like this, but you need to work on the script even if it got a good few laughs from me, and get a voice actor. Also you kept jumping between present and past-tense. "Despite the fact this was a mental institution, I'd seen no disability access anywhere" Got me laughing pretty hard

[QUOTE=whatthe;43652774]I like this, but you need to work on the script even if it got a good few laughs from me, and get a voice actor. Also you kept jumping between present and past-tense. "Despite the fact this was a mental institution, I'd seen no disability access anywhere" Got me laughing pretty hard[/QUOTE] Well thanks man! i'm glad that some people are at least finding my humor mildly funny ;), The main reason i'm hesitant to rely on someone else for voice is two fold 1. I'm not sure that a VA could keep up with the demand of 2 episodes per week, or my script writing for that matter ( I mostly just kinda make it up as I watch the footage) 2. I'm not really in any position to pay anyone for their voice work (unemployed & starting college this year) So if you know anyone who has VA experiance + good equipment and the ability to keep up with my release schedule and do it all for FREE! i'll gladly take them on ;)

Hey guy's Outlast Noir Episode 5 Will be live in around 10 minutes, catch it and my other episodes here [url]http://www.youtube.com/user/SmoothFranko[/url] [editline]25th January 2014[/editline] [video=youtube;0HLrrwgB170]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0HLrrwgB170[/video] Getter Better or Worse? Let me know ;)