once again i have drawn a "Dark scene" aand here it is
[IMG]http://i35.tinypic.com/23lf72b.png[/IMG]
if you could, tell me how i can improve it, thanks
Whats the guy doing?
crawling out the cave :3
-Shading on mountains is absolutely incorrect
-The moon; try a new technique to render it, the spray can is a bad option in 99% of cases.
-Small patch of dense trees on a single mountain?
-Trees look out of place, color wise.
-Can't tell what's happening in the cave, some ghost getting eaten is my guess.
-Mountains look inaccurate; too vertical with very little space between them
-Furthest back (darkest mountain) shouldn't be that dark, doesn't give it a sense of distance
-2D perspective
With the painful criticism out of the way I will say that you should continue trying. Read some tutorials...lots of tutorials, when you walk around look around and learn from how lighting effects certain objects, especially at night. Search "Mountains" in Google and LOOK at what mountains look like.
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