A music video I recently made. Please leave some constructive criticism - General

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKOY94ANXEg[/media] The genre this song belongs to, for those interested, is Dongstep. It's a new genre that fuses Dubstep, Norwegian folk music and other styles together. Listen to 1:20 for the sick bass drop.

Needs more dong.

"drop"

[QUOTE=Paranoia10;45805837]"drop"[/QUOTE] Thank you.

i meant there isn't one [editline]26th August 2014[/editline] "thumbs up for CRAZY bass drop"

To be honest, you'd have better luck for constructive criticism in the [URL="http://facepunch.com/forumdisplay.php?f=315"]Musician's Gig section[/URL] of the forums. Pro tip about FP, generally you don't post your own content outside of Creationism Corner or Hobbies. And you'll attract alot more useful criticism in the respective subforums.

Also if you registered to promote yourself instead of actually being part of the community, you should instead opt to not do that. Since I'm on mobile and can't watch the video, if you're a gimmick user and it's a joke song, carry on.

[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;45806025]Also if you registered to promote yourself instead of actually being part of the community, you should instead opt to not do that. Since I'm on mobile and can't watch the video, if you're a gimmick user and it's a joke song, carry on.[/QUOTE] It's not a joke song, I actually worked very hard on it. I've wanted to be a music producer all my life, and this song was an attempt to create something original and fresh.

congrats on your doom wad soundtrack

I'm sorry man, but I burst into laughter at the "drop". This is really weird shit.

im hooked

Allright I get it if you think it's funny or whatever because it sounds a little different, but you guys have to understand something: This is something I put my soul into. I took inspiration from the music from my country and childhood. This is as personal as it gets for me. The message that i try to convey with my music is that you can't forget your past, and that you must look to the future, and live your life to the fullest. That is why i fuse two different genres together. The norwegian folk music represents the warm past, and the dubstep is the cold and inevitable future. The future that is death. This is why i post this on my personal account btw, to show that I am serious.

[QUOTE=Gaius;45806792]Allright I get it if you think it's funny or whatever because it sounds a little different, but you guys have to understand something: This is something I put my soul into. I took inspiration from the music from my country and childhood. This is as personal as it gets for me. The message that i try to convey with my music is that you can't forget your past, and that you must look to the future, and live your life to the fullest. That is why i fuse two different genres together. The norwegian folk music represents the warm past, and the dubstep is the cold and inevitable future. The future that is death. This is why i post this on my personal account btw, to show that I am serious.[/QUOTE] Wait, are you seriously announcing your alternate accounts? Music-wise, I believe you discovered the brown note at the drop, for I seem to have spontaneously shit myself.

I think there are some slight issues with your timing.

I'm so glad I finally got the chance to sit down at my compy 387 and listen to this i'm crying actually the live performance at wembley is even better [media]http://soundcloud.com/dj-dong-1/dubstep-funeral-live-from-wembley-stadium-2014[/media]

[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;45807141]I'm so glad I finally got the chance to sit down at my compy 387 and listen to this i'm crying actually the live performance at wembley is even better [media]http://soundcloud.com/dj-dong-1/dubstep-funeral-live-from-wembley-stadium-2014[/media][/QUOTE] I'm glad my music was able to move you :)

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45807325]I'm glad my music was able to move you :)[/QUOTE] It didn't so much move me as it moved my bowels.

This is, er... horrible. This doesn't sound "new and refreshing" it just sounds bad.

[QUOTE=Dub!;45807420]This is, er... horrible. This doesn't sound "new and refreshing" it just sounds bad.[/QUOTE] Well that is just your opinion. I'm sure a lot of people who listened to the song here liked it but won't admit since they are scared of being different.

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45807639]Well that is just your opinion. I'm sure a lot of people who listened to the song here liked it but won't admit since they are scared of being different.[/QUOTE] Um, no, its really is horrible, but in a funny way. Keep up with it.

[QUOTE=TheRealDJDong;45807639]Well that is just your opinion. I'm sure a lot of people who listened to the song here liked it but won't admit since they are scared of being different.[/QUOTE] troll detected.

[QUOTE=G-Strogg;45807720]troll detected.[/QUOTE] You couldn't guess by his name being fucking 'DJ Dong'?

Mix in some deathmetal growls.

2:16 sounds like a clarinet falling down the stairs. I hope this is a serious thread this is so amazingly terrible.

There's more! [video=youtube;ZXzTJk0373Q]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZXzTJk0373Q&list=UUOdJObMPKBsDORWicloWrOQ[/video] [video=youtube;OeNrCX57Zc8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OeNrCX57Zc8&list=UUOdJObMPKBsDORWicloWrOQ[/video] This is the best thing ever

The drop is amazing. Not necessarily due to its quality, but it amazed me. However random sounds go slightly off-rythm throughout the whole song and it's really offputting. Also, good lord the 'instruments'

it sucked 10/10

I'm crying :v: [editline]26th August 2014[/editline] The drop sounded like a cow was being murdered oh lord

it's so terrible yet i cant stop listening to it

I don't know what you guys are talking about, we've clearly got the next Skrillex on our hands.