Peroxide Ladybirds - You Could Use Some Sun [Music Video]

[Bynine]

[video=youtube;ynYgAZdG30o]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynYgAZdG30o[/video]

hey! here's a music video from my band, Peroxide Ladybirds. the video, which another member of the band made, is comprised from a bunch of clips from old cartoons, commercials, things like that. hope you enjoy

[kariko]

That one electronic organ sorta instrument kind of sounds like random notes. I don't feel like there's a melody going on with that instrument. It also doesn't really feel like the song gets started if that makes sense? Like it's building up but nothing ever comes. Maybe it's just not my kind of music though.

To leave off with a positive, I listened to some other songs on the album and I actually like "A River in Egypt" and "Waves, Again". They sound neat to me.

[dangitbobby]

I feel like this song is really inconsistent. The guitar and goblins esque synth don't really match up and it sounds like the track is fighting itself. There's an obvious attempt at syncopation but it kinda falls flat on its face because the synth sounds out of key.

I can kinda see what you guys were going for but I don't think it works, keep it up though.

[srobins]

Like kariko said, the out of key syth kinda ruins it for me. The drum machine is really neat, reminds me a lot of Radiohead. I kinda liked the general feeling or emotion of the track but i think you need to work on making it more consistent/polished. The feeling of 1.18-1.25 is just awesome, like the track genuinely has some really great potential man. Cool video as well. Also some vocals would really seal the deal for me.