Ive made a new website and its on a website builder but i just want to know what i should add or take out or improve on in that matter. Enjoy
[url]http://randommayostains.yolasite.com/[/url]
Colours of fonts are horrible as they are either too bright or too dark. Placement of assets is weird. Spelling and grammar are pretty bad; they actually made me uninterested in the other content of the site such as the videos.
It might be cool if you changed the background to have faded edges, so that it blends into the black background colour. Then center align everything.
Anyways, website builders are terrible, html is easy.
Thank you kind sir.
I suggest changing the default font, it doesn't look well for me. And the text on the random pics page is horribly aligned.
That's better than I expected, for a website builder.
Thank you all for the constructive criticism
on the homepage try and keep the balance between bold text and normal as needed, i personally dont think the bold text should be used unless its to get attention, and mostly for keywords or titles.
It needs more mustard.
Also about me page the font doesn't work well, and don't use black since it makes it harder to read.
ok I made a few changes in what you guys have said.
More content, even if its not in the form of videos would help
Ok good sir
your coding is horrible, why would you style in the html sheet.
Also boring and plain design
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also wtf is with all the different fonts? You should stick to only two and wtf COMIC SANS U GOTTA BE KIDDING ME.
[QUOTE=Detlef;28398061]your coding is horrible, why would you style in the html sheet.
Also boring and plain design
[editline]3rd March 2011[/editline]
also wtf is with all the different fonts? You should stick to only two and wtf COMIC SAND U GOTTA BE KIDDING ME.[/QUOTE]
comic sand
[editline]3rd March 2011[/editline]
"Charlie Seans first big movie was Platoon."
who is this charlie sean???????
[editline]3rd March 2011[/editline]
and thats not even true anyway!!!!
You need to separate your elements. The navbar on the left needs a background as well as the main text column thing. And don't use serif fonts.
[QUOTE=Rusty100;28398187]comic sand
[editline]3rd March 2011[/editline]
"Charlie Seans first big movie was Platoon."
who is this charlie sean???????
[editline]3rd March 2011[/editline]
and thats not even true anyway!!!![/QUOTE]
S is close to D u know it!!!!
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