[video=youtube;QnjLPt5RuYk]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnjLPt5RuYk&hd=1[/video] This is the polished re-edited version of my previous video 'Detonation Prototype'. The explosion has been polished and improved, and the previous recording has been replaced with one made by my high school orchestra, the Carmel High School Symphony Orchestra
Why did that guy park the car in a random place and then walk across half the city?
Anyway, I'm not sure what you were trying to gain from making this video. If it's just a test film, it's not that bad. I've seen much worse. Most of all the explosion and the acting need a lot of work. The story doesn't really make sense, and seems quite pointless. I actually laughed when, a the beginning, the camera panned up to show that "brute" face.
For stuff like ambiance and street noises, use ADR/post production dubbing.
It's REALLY noticeable when you cut between shots, the audio always has that little inconsistency
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Also, the white balance and brightness needs a lot of tweaking
As for the explosion, cut it out. It looks really cheesy and amateurish. Just show a shot of the guy walking away, a bit of flashing and a sploding noise. It looks more dramatic too.
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Also the dude's limp looks more like a silly duckwalk. Watch a couple of videos of people limping and practice it. It's easy to tell when someone is faking a limp
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