• Facing My Demons (Stream Of Consciousness Rap)
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[video=youtube;f1VN9_9SLv4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=51CHRsIG8Jw[/video] Ever just sit down with a blunt and bottle and just reflect on how shitty your life is? Well here's the jumbled thoughts i came up with. Lyrics: I'm high still smoking Got some alcohol for the moment Imma own it Cause its all I have Cause the futures gone and the past passed ....and that's that Oh god I think I'm having a flashback Of me getting laughed at In school was Neva kool but I was a class act Now I finally grew up Feeling like a bomb that neva blew I'm a dud That diamond in the rough I'm a stud Put my foot in it n they did me dirty like shoes on the Rug Leave all ya dirt at the door Matt Or don't come in I got floor traps A few cobwebs a few more rats A few skeletons a few tourist That have tourretes cause they keep popping up on my mind all the time To remind I try to forget about em But deep down I know I wouldn't here without em Can't let it go I wanted elope no time to emote That's why I'm putting on a play I can't let it show You ripped my heart out my chest just to let it grow U gone wit the cold wind I just let it blow Didn't even lock up when u left the door This is random but I feel like a phantom They see me falling but they just wanna clear my landing If it was them falling I woulda went hand in hand Nd caught em before they got mauled in a pit of pits that's starving that don't get visitors often so please don't cross em So what do I do my life is a at crossing Nd I can't run I suffering from exhaustion No I don't ball but i got a ball to toss em See if they can fetch with them big teeth they flossing I throw it far I throw it high I give it all I got my last try I don't belong im not a bad guy But i see them coming in for the kill But i can't speak my r lips sealed wanna say shoo wanna say heel But they came for my soul twas a great meal Category:
at least you own a house
So waddya think
This is nice man, lyrics are dope and instrumentals are cool too. I'd listen to more for sure !
I added a second verse also
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I like it, sorry that that's not in-depth enough
It's not bad. The rapping's OK, could use some improvement. Instrumentally it's nice.
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