here's a comic i drew a while back and just wanted to share it and see what you wonderful people thought
[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/190/6/e/Swift_Vengeance_P1__by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
[img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/190/e/f/Swift_Vengeance_P2_by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/190/c/1/Swift_Vengeance_P3_by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/190/1/6/Swift_Vengeance_P4_by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/190/4/3/Swift_Vengeance_P5_by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/190/b/2/Swift_Vengeance_P6_by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/190/f/f/Swift_Vengeance_P7_by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
[img]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2010/190/2/0/Swift_Vengeance_P8_by_SpectreDelta.jpg[/img]
well thats it i hope you enjoyed it as much as the last person to view it did, unless they didnt enjoy it then you should do it for them :smug:
I like it, congrats on the first post. Hope to see bigger and better posts in the future.
the adventures of squinty mcsquint in flatland
It's not terrible, but everything is drawn from a 90 degree angle or is just straight up flat. I'd advise doing some research on perspective and anatomy. and some shading would help a ton too.
And some backgrounds and perhaps proper pannels
It's silly. You have no grasp of military protocols and the squadnames... scorpions, yeah that's [B]cool![/B]
The art is really bad, you have no grasp of anatomy or overall basic drawing techniques.
Everything is bland and I dind't make any difference with the characters. Half the text is impossible to read and I lost intrest with the second panel. Usually this kind of stuff is so bad it becomes entertaining but this isn't even the case. It's just kind of like this
[IMG]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_eyj9e-ki0dE/TIQzi7AyfaI/AAAAAAAAAD0/5D2tLL8qpsI/s1600/All+the+kids+Airsoft+war.jpg[/IMG]
All the subjects thinks "FUCK YEAH WERE AWESOME AND TACTICOOL"
while everyone else thinks "Wow... that's sad"
Drawspace.com has a good set of tutorials.
Quick everybody wear these goggles.
Don't put them on though, then they would protect your eyes, and we can't have that!
Stop making comics because all you're doing is encouraging development of bad technique. Take the time to learn how to draw.
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