I wanted to make a comic, but I didn't know what to do. I work at Borders Bookstore, and decided to make a comic series entitled... Tales from a Bookseller Noir. Tell me what you think!
[img]http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/4188/page1y.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/8844/page2lxl.jpg[/img]
Same face in all panels, Meh art, unfunny, uninteresting.
Work on it more.
:wtc:
Thanks for the tips. I'm not an artist or anything, I just whipped these up in photoshop in like 10 minutes haha.
I expected a good joke at the end
I'm disappointed
Well hey, if you thought it should have ended differently, you can post your ideas too! It can be a collaborative project lolz.
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Well, sorry you guys didn't like it, I'll just have to change it or do something different.
[QUOTE=Xerios3;16649459]I expected a good joke at the end
I'm disappointed[/QUOTE]
As was I.
[QUOTE=onox37;16650015]As was I.[/QUOTE]
So what do you think the joke should have been? I can't think of what it could have been.
[QUOTE=xSlay3Rx;16650078]So what do you think the joke should have been? I can't think of what it could have been.[/QUOTE]
Not sure. To be honest I didn't feel like it could have gone anywhere.
[QUOTE=onox37;16650104]Not sure. To be honest I didn't feel like it could have gone anywhere.[/QUOTE]
You're probably right haha... and that's probably why it sucks! >_<
This looks more like Macromedia Fireworks than Photoshop.
[QUOTE=Justin Case;16650260]This looks more like Macromedia Fireworks than Photoshop.[/QUOTE]
What I did was make the scenes in Photoshop, and then I added them into a program called Comic Life. Comic Life is what I used to add the bubbles, and effects text (and all the frames).
Um..do you...have a sort of...[i]dislike[/i] for your customers?
P.S. Noir means black, so unless you make the panels darker or are black, I don't think it really fits.
Haha, I like almost every customer that comes through. But you could apply this to any retail job, when you just get that one customer that ruins your day lol.
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