A rap song I made - General

I made the beat ~and~ the raps [url]http://soundcloud.com/d-cep/evil-ass-1[/url] v:v:v

I liked it.

shit's tight. I like the part where you said, "i would make a super dad but i would feed a baby beer until it pukes and gags ", wise words man.

sounds like some RZA shit

bro, dat'san pimp-tight rap song ya did dere, not da bomb but pimp-tight.. Maybe I should share uh song or two fo' da hood [editline]17th December 2010[/editline] ya hear me playa'? [editline]17th December 2010[/editline] bro what ya th'o't about me an' ya havin' uh rape battle 1 on 1?

wanton abuse of the common apostrophe

[QUOTE=TH89;26756865]wanton abuse of the common apostrophe[/QUOTE] sounds like retarded shit if you ask me

Pretty good I give it a 7.5 out of 10.

I like it :buddy:

what the fuck is pimp-tight

What are you trying to convey, if anything?

This is pretty cool, i especially like the beat

[QUOTE=Sporkfire;26761015]What are you trying to convey, if anything?[/QUOTE] That I rule

The beat is great Your rapping is pretty good but a bit awkward at times Also don't you pronounce it like base? I wouldn't know I'm not native english speaking but isn't it?

yeah i noticed that too you said bass like bass instead of base

Yeah but then it doesn't rhyme

true

I don't usually enjoy rap, but I must say this was rather funny. Congratulations. :golfclap:

man maybe i should post some of my beats, i keep forgetting

but i like matisyahu

This is pretty good. I liked the part where you went like "Evil ah-uh-eh-oh-eh-uh-ah-ass", it made me laugh.

It was better than I was expecting it to be, and was actually fairly good, but it's not my style..

At points you sound like a gangsta white boy, and at others you sound like you could be someone's stern dad. although the tommy wiseau bit made me laugh

[QUOTE=TH89;26756865]wanton abuse of the common apostrophe[/QUOTE] Trying to avoid the subject? Why don't you accept his offer for a rap battle?

[QUOTE=James*;26762184]but i like matisyahu[/QUOTE] I don't like matisyahu

Fucking love it man.

It's pretty good :buddy:

[QUOTE=Starpluck;26771565]Trying to avoid the subject? Why don't you accept his offer for a rap battle?[/QUOTE] Real rap battle's are done live, "freestyle"'d, basically come up with lines on the spot it's damn hard.. Rap battling over Facepunch, I've done it before in a thread in the music section, it's dead easy because you can have an hour or so pretending you're elsewhere while you think up lines..

[QUOTE=TH89;26778676]I don't like matisyahu[/QUOTE] You should like Matisyahu

hella of a plot, box and whisker comedic genius