I just like it when people look at my pictures, i know it's probably sub par compared to a ton of other stuff posted in here.
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I decided to not add lashes/brow because i didn't want to soil it, because i can not draw hair that well yet.
You should add some specularity
I once learned from Arts class that if you want to make a portait (or an eye in general) look realistic, you would have to make it look shiny/reflective.
Add the highlight (which is the brightest area), and more shading on the white of the eye.
This creeped me out..
Too dark and has no highlights. The lack of hair ruins it. You didn't use any references, now did you?
Google eye and take a good image and study it for a while, especially how the highlights and shadows go.
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Upper eyelid is missing apparently.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;21055563]Too dark and has no highlights. The lack of hair ruins it. You didn't use any references, now did you?
Google eye and take a good image and study it for a while, especially how the highlights and shadows go.
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Upper eyelid is missing apparently.[/QUOTE]
I did have a reference, and i am sorry for not making a 1:1 copy, I've just started learning to draw and i am self taught. I'm hoping to improve through trial and error and just like to stop and share every now and again. I'm not angry by your comment, i welcome constructive criticism. It's just the lack of positive criticism that is also desired.
You desire the lack of positive criticism?
There can't be positive criticism, hence why it's called criticism.
[QUOTE=Dylan_94;21058719]I did have a reference, and i am sorry for not making a 1:1 copy, I've just started learning to draw and i am self taught. I'm hoping to improve through trial and error and just like to stop and share every now and again. I'm not angry by your comment, i welcome constructive criticism. It's just the lack of positive criticism that is also desired.[/QUOTE]
If you want positive critisism, you go and ask your mom or friends.
You should make 1 on 1 copies, you'll learn more. Don't be afraid of fucking up, you'll get those "Ohhh I should've done that and that so it woudl've not ended up as [I]that[/I]" moments and you'll learn faster.
I am self taught as well, besides it's an horrible excuse.
its awesome! i like it :D you definately have more talent than me...i cant draw at all XD
Spend more time lightly drawing.
Sketching it's called.
Sketch, draw the outline, erase all and redraw the outline with one, smooth line.
[QUOTE=Dylan_94;21058719]i welcome constructive criticism. It's just the lack of positive criticism that is also desired.[/QUOTE]
positive criticism requires something positive
not trying to be rude, just saying
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