omg this was well embarrassin fam
hope no one ever finds this thread again
Looks nice, it'd be good if the shading was a lot less scribbly, though. And I'd suggest an alleyway sort of setting, maybe? Could do some fun stuff with a street lamp lighting it.
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i called him patches
its my cat that just died
Gah someone IMG THUMB those suckers!
I'd say it's decent if you're a first time artist, but I don't know much in the way of art (although I'd really, really like to).
The shoes don't seem to fit to me. They seem to be stuck together as one big mass. Also, try to clean up the outline a bit, I see the style you're going for but it's a bit too messy.
His arms also look rather awkward, especially his right. It's just.. not physically possible.
Color the man inside the black lines. Else it looks like crap, and fast made.
It looks better than last time, but the shading does indeed look quite scribbly and not too great.
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