• "Festival" Posters
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Okay these aren't really festivals, but local community events meant to aid chairty or support a cause. ANY AND ALL comments are great, i want to make these as profesional as possible. [b]Thanks in advance, i know i can relate on CC to give some helpful advice.[/b] [highlight]Ignore the words, they are all placeholders.[/highlight] [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/4vib7c.png[/img] [img]http://i49.tinypic.com/8yxmit.png[/img]
They are really cool and professional looking. Good job. [editline]09:02PM[/editline] wait a minute that second one looks like you took an existing poster and cut a bit out to add your own words...
That's great, thanks for raising the bar of school designs for Britian.
BAND MULTICULTURAL BAND BAND UNITED TOGETHER STUNNING OPPRESSIONS CELEBRATE UNITY MUSIC PEOPLE BAND BAND BAND BAND MUSIC HAPPY BAND BAND FASCISM OPPOSE FIGHT CELEBRATE band band band band band band band band band band band band [editline]09:05PM[/editline] Definitely too cluttered for my tastes. [editline]09:05PM[/editline] band band band band
[QUOTE=Perfumly;18732796]BAND MULTICULTURAL BAND BAND UNITED TOGETHER STUNNING OPPRESSIONS CELEBRATE UNITY MUSIC PEOPLE BAND BAND BAND BAND MUSIC HAPPY BAND BAND FASCISM OPPOSE FIGHT CELEBRATE band band band band band band band band band band band band[/QUOTE] Yeah lol. Just placeholders until i get the playlist, sorry about that. I agree completely about the cluttered thing, i'll change that thanks. [QUOTE=_Mythic;18732748]wait a minute that second one looks like you took an existing poster and cut a bit out to add your own words...[/QUOTE] I've not seen any poster anything like that :S I got the idea from the hendrix piece i did.
in that case awesome mate
[QUOTE=_Mythic;18732748] wait a minute that second one looks like you took an existing poster and cut a bit out to add your own words...[/QUOTE] Nah, he kind of "highlighted" the important text. (The text with information about the concert/ festival)
[img]http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1518/donactions.png[/img] Is it spelled differently over where you live? I'm just wondering, in case it's a typo of some kind. I like the first poster, but i'm not too much of a fan of the highlighting in the second one. It is my opinon that a more curvatured shape would've looked nicer, but I am weird.
[QUOTE=HeroicPillow;18738121][img]http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1518/donactions.png[/img] Is it spelled differently over where you live? I'm just wondering, in case it's a typo of some kind.[/QUOTE] Nope i'm just retarded :p. Thanks for spotting that. I highlighted the words to make sure they were the center of the poster, otherwise they may be completely overlooked by people. Thanks for the suggestions so far, i'll post the updates once they're done.
they look alot like the iPod silhouette ads
[QUOTE=kk152;18743675]they look alot like the iPod silhouette ads[/QUOTE] How so?
The problem I'd say for both of them is that the key pieces of information don't 'pop' enough, it all flows into a big block of text that seems intimidating and dense to anyone looking at it better contrast between text and BG, especially on the second one, and better differentiation between each element would make it much easier to read and better as a result
[QUOTE=DaveP;18765376]The problem I'd say for both of them is that the key pieces of information don't 'pop' enough, it all flows into a big block of text that seems intimidating and dense to anyone looking at it better contrast between text and BG, especially on the second one, and better differentiation between each element would make it much easier to read and better as a result[/QUOTE] Yeah that was my main worry with the second one. I just wanted to check it was an issue. I'll get on that asap, thanks.
Oh man, I love music, hate and racism!
I just noticed that the second poster was in the shape of Africa. :v: :golfclap:
[QUOTE=HeroicPillow;18768324]I just noticed that the second poster was in the shape of Africa. :v: :golfclap:[/QUOTE] No it's not, it's a rectangle. Do you need to learn shapes? :ohdear:
[QUOTE=HeroicPillow;18768324]I just noticed that the second poster was in the shape of Africa. :v: :golfclap:[/QUOTE] Yeah that's my amazing subliminal messaging skills at work there :P. Anymore comments, they are greatly appreciated.
I only notice two more things, and they are both in the first poster. Racism, at the top of the poster where the main title is, almost looks like Bacism. There is no connection at the top-left half of the R, so it messes with my mind. "LoveMusic,HateRacism" at the bottom left of the poster. The top part of it is yellow, and completely blends into the background. If you made that little logo for it, how about changing the yellow text to black/white like the bottom part. Like so: (Bold = black, nonbold = white) [b]Love[/b]Music Hate[b]Racism[/b]
[QUOTE=HeroicPillow;18775073]I only notice two more things, and they are both in the first poster. Racism, at the top of the poster where the main title is, almost looks like Bacism. There is no connection at the top-left half of the R, so it messes with my mind. "LoveMusic,HateRacism" at the bottom left of the poster. The top part of it is yellow, and completely blends into the background. If you made that little logo for it, how about changing the yellow text to black/white like the bottom part. Like so: (Bold = black, nonbold = white) [b]Love[/b]Music Hate[b]Racism[/b][/QUOTE] Good ideas, i'll try em out. That logo wasn't done by me, but i don't think they'll mind a bit of tweaking.
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