[QUOTE=LifeIsGood;34057499]Could use improving.
[I]Lots of it.[/I][/QUOTE]
You're halfway to constructive criticism.
I liked most of the shots. The concept was interesting and the plot is almost there.
I thought the one-liner cop was the best actor.
Could have used some mic's to record instead of the camera's microphone.
Half Life 2 music never works
Except in Half Life 2
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