I'm making a crappily drawn Bioshock comic - General

[highlight][url=http://forums.2kgames.com/forums/showthread.php?t=63208]CLICK HERE TO GO TO THE 2K FORUM FOR UPDATES IF I AM BANNED AND/OR LAZY[/url][/highlight] Updates M, W, F! Daijitsu-endorsed! [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/zjau5d.png[/img] :siren:[B]NEWEST STUFF[/B]:siren: [quote]PAGE 150 IS FINALLY DONE! And it's a biggun at 16.5 MB! It's the length of eight regular pages plus some editing! So I guess that comes first. [url=http://youtuberepeater.com/watch?v=wTWh2nCh5eE&name=MadHatter+Bullets+Buckshot]THIS IS THE REQUIRED LISTENING FOR THIS SPECIAL![/url] I had to upload it with Filesmelt since there's no size limit. Give it a bit to load, would you kindly? [url=http://filesmelt.com/dl/whole150.PNG]Page 150[/url] [url=http://youtuberepeater.com/watch?v=wTWh2nCh5eE&name=MadHatter+Bullets+Buckshot](required listening!)[/url] First and foremost: I apologize for the copious amount of smudges. It's been sitting in my binder, sandwhiched between hundreds of pages for a long, LONG time. I just finished it, though I started it weeks ago. I've always loved nerdcore rap, it's the ONLY kind of rap I like besides maybe 80s rap. This song caught my ear after a while and I absolutely could not get it out of my head. I hadn't drawn Page 150 yet, so I figured WHY NOT. And it turned out pretty good! Look for another song-page come number 200! I've already got a song picked out! Anyway, now that 150 is out of the way, here's a regular page! [url=http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/7167/157zn.png]Page 157[/url] And with that, we're back on track! Welcome to the present, comic! But we aren't done yet! Here's some bonus content! [url=http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7541/jackfinished.png]Jack desktop background! (it's 1280x1024)[/url] Eventually I'll make one for every character. Speaking of characters I noticed that Bioshock doesn't have that many. Jack doesn't really count, so there's Atlas/Fontaine, Tenenbaum, Langford, Peach, Ryan, Cohen, and, well, that's it, really. The second game has even less. Anyway, more on Friday![/quote] [B]ARCHIVE[/B] [url=http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/4018/partone.png][B]PART ONE: A CRASH[/B][/url] [URL="http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/8879/titlesg.png"]-Bioshock-[/URL] [url=http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/8641/75597288.png]Page 1[/url] [url=http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2512/46507722.png]Page 2[/url] [url=http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/7994/52879810.png]Page 3[/url] [url=http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2808/78282792.png]Page 4[/url] [URL="http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/8008/chapterone.png"]-Welcome to Rapture-[/URL] [url=http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/4075/31820152.png]Page 5[/url] [url=http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/8548/53419899.png]Page 6[/url] [url=http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1668/77929800.png]Page 7[/url] [url=http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8166/48584760.png]Page 8[/url] [url=http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/3897/94632503.png]Page 9[/url] [url=http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/8156/29700828.png]Page 10[/url] 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I didn't find it hilarious or anything but it played off the annoyances of game alright E: this was posted when the thread was brand new, and it was based off of what I saw at that time.

I read it all, the anti-aliasing line was pretty good, other than that it seems like just a retelling. Maybe in flash it might work well, with simple animation.

The Loading bit was good at the end I demand you make moe of these, they are actualy pretty good v:v:v And i kinda like the artwork of it for some reason.

"No, says the man in Soviet Russia - man belongs to sweat!" I actually laughed at that.

i think it's funny.

"What the hell is this shit? I wanted spare change!" Made me laugh

Bland & Unoriginal if you ask me. Maybe try adding some more variety to the backgrounds or hmm.. maybe adding backgrounds at all? I know you sad 'crappily drawn' but I still feel that there's hardly any effort behind this.

Not much goes on in this page besides the blatant murder of one Johnny McNPC. Rest in peace, Johnny. You will be missed. [url=http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/4075/31820152.png]Page 5[/url] [QUOTE=MortalK0mbat;20597393]Bland & Unoriginal if you ask me. Maybe try adding some more variety to the backgrounds or hmm.. maybe adding backgrounds at all? I know you sad 'crappily drawn' but I still feel that there's hardly any effort behind this.[/QUOTE] I will take this into consideration. I mean, I like to keep it simple. Too much background would blur the line between the characters and the words they're saying. Then again, not enough background makes the comic look kind of bland. I'll try and find a good balance over the next few pages.

You broke the fourth wall. I am sad now.

So is this going to mimic the beginning in very large detail, and then get choppier as the game expands?

Should be an animation. If you can get the timing right, it could be hilarious!

Newest comic is awesome, i'd imagine this being animated, that'd be awesome.

snip for future use

"Oh, okay, i guess you could do that" That just made me laugh, im instantly a fan of this and demand the whole bioshock story to be made. These are just so awesome

Today's comic features turrets syndrome. Please use turrets only to draw Rosebud splicers out of hiding, as turrets syndrome is a very serious thing. Remember, robot hell is a very real place. [url=http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/8548/53419899.png]Page 6[/url] [editline]08:40AM[/editline] [QUOTE=BlackWind;20609708]"Oh, okay, i guess you could do that" That just made me laugh, im instantly a fan of this and demand the whole bioshock story to be made. These are just so awesome[/QUOTE] why thank you sir

These are great, 3 was my favorite. Make more. [editline]09:46AM[/editline] I post asking for more, and i get :ninja:'d by a post with another one. I like this.

The title of your thread says this is crappy and you said in the OP you are too lazy to do part of it properly. I find it hard to get excited about things that have low investment in them. The art is stick figures and the faces are made up of lines. Not for me.

[QUOTE=jewdozer;20612799]The title of your thread says this is crappy and you said in the OP you are too lazy to do part of it properly. I find it hard to get excited about things that have low investment in them. The art is stick figures and the faces are made up of lines. Not for me.[/QUOTE] [img]http://www.ayo4theo.com/stuff/pics/haters-gonna-hate.gif[/img] Seriously though, I'm sure my declaration of laziness might turn away some people but I assure you I spend time on it. If I didn't think it was worth showing I wouldn't have bothered scanning pages of it over the past week and posting them here. I'm willing to admit I am not graced with the power of art talent, especially in the perspective area of the whole thing, and I'm not really willing to spend too much time learning how to draw something else when people are already satisfied with what I do. If the demand rises, I'll rise to the demand. Simple as that.

[QUOTE=Doomish;20614863] If the demand rises, I'll rise to the demand. Simple as that.[/QUOTE] Theres always a demand for improvement and fine art on here, rise to the challenge Herr Doomish.

I have been notified that the link for page 3 is broken. It has been reuploaded.

...it's got no anti-aliasing.

This is awesome. Make more please.

Before I post today's page, I'm going to link to [url=http://bioshock.wikia.com/wiki/Wrench]this[/url] Bioshock Wiki article about Jack's Wrench. Please tell me how the hell I'm supposed to draw that in stick form. Anyway, it looks like some sort of Russian backwards R or something, but it's the best I could do with stick figures. [url=http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1668/77929800.png]Page 7[/url]

That is fantastic! Loved every panel!

"Wuss, Coo', Impossible" I love the humour in this

This is pretty cool and funny. Well done dood xD. I still need to finish the game though... I got it in the bargain bucket 2 weeks ago. I got halfway through and started playing oblivion instead. Godamn my unfinished stack of games!

In honor of, uh, not posting a single page last weekend (sorry 'bout that, I try to post one a day), I bring you a double down page special today! Two for the price of one, and it don't cost you no ADAM neither! [url=http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8166/48584760.png]Page 8[/url] [url=http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/3897/94632503.png]Page 9[/url] I apologize for the lack of jokes on these two pages, but I have to follow the story first before I take my creative licenses. I'll be sure to use Diane McClintock's side of the story to my advantage, since it's already sort of like a subplot heard through Audio Diaries. In case you don't know of Diane, she's featured in the first audio diary you pick up, and, well, her story branches off from there. I found out that if you pay attention there's a ton of little subplots you can follow if you listen to all the diaries you pick up. Anyway, see you tomorrow with more content!

HAHA! Dude your a genius, loved the fathoms part :xd: brb gonna read more [editline]02:45PM[/editline] It.....It's got no anti aliasing :cawg: I lol'd hard.

Can't wait for more, it's got enough humor to make the artstyle (or lack thereof) just right. :buddy: