Very first FL studio result, tell me what to improve - General

:siren:[B]WARNING! THIS IS MY FIRST PIECE OF WORK AND I WISH FOR RECCOMENDATIONS ON WHAT TO CHANGE, ADD, REMOVE, PLUG-INS ETC. I ONLY HAVE THE DEMO SO I COULDN'T SPAN IT OVER A FEW DAYS, BUT THIS IS WHAT I GOT WITH A TUTORIAL.[/B] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6f8p74qPVqo[/media] It can seem a little screechy so I advise playing it at low volume until I find a remedy for the screeching.

You might get better feedback if you post this in the creationism corner. More people visit there. Alot of the people here probably wont listen to this. It wasn't too bad for a first attempts, which was it seems basically messing around and learning. It wasn't very interesting though, maybe more layers would help build it up more.

[QUOTE=fragger0;17813711]You might get better feedback if you post this in the creationism corner. More people visit there. Alot of the people here probably wont listen to this. It wasn't too bad for a first attempts, which was it seems basically messing around and learning. It wasn't very interesting though, maybe more layers would help build it up more.[/QUOTE] People here are more experienced. Thanks for the advice, every time I tried making it more interesting adding a new sound or something it always went wrong with something else and ended up getting warped in to this after I ended up raging on it.

I don't like the drum line TBH. The 2 synths didn't go too well together either. It's not bad though, keep practicing.

Drum line sucks deep (Try more synth-style drums) but otherwise not that awful.

Not good with drums yet, I'll try downloading some plugins. While we're on about plugins, can someone link me to some free ones? [editline]08:48PM[/editline] And sound samples [editline]08:48PM[/editline] anything remotely shiny or interesting

Im guessing you play an instrument already? If not thats your problem.

[QUOTE=reviewmad;17814574]Not good with drums yet, I'll try downloading some plugins. While we're on about plugins, can someone link me to some free ones? [editline]08:48PM[/editline] And sound samples [editline]08:48PM[/editline] anything remotely shiny or interesting[/QUOTE] [url]http://www.kvraudio.com/get.php?mode=results&st=adv&soft=i&type[/url][]=0&f=0&fe=0&linux=1&osx=1&win=1&free=1&sf=0&receptor=&de=0&sort=1&rpp=100 This has a lot of free plug-ins. Also: [url]http://www.youtube.com/user/nfxbeats?blend=1&ob=4[/url] He is mostly a Hip-Hop guy but he has a hell of a lot of tutorials on using FL Studio(not just for Hip Hop).

[QUOTE=fragger0;17814871]Im guessing you play an instrument already? If not thats your problem.[/QUOTE] I play the guitar as a very very very last resort form of entertainment and I can read basic sheet music off of a piano. I prefer virtual instruments to be honest. [editline]09:55PM[/editline] [QUOTE=yawmwen;17815173][url]http://www.kvraudio.com/get.php?mode=results&st=adv&soft=i&type[/url][]=0&f=0&fe=0&linux=1&osx=1&win=1&free=1&sf=0&receptor=&de=0&sort=1&rpp=100 This has a lot of free plug-ins. Also: [url]http://www.youtube.com/user/nfxbeats?blend=1&ob=4[/url] He is mostly a Hip-Hop guy but he has a hell of a lot of tutorials on using FL Studio(not just for Hip Hop).[/QUOTE] and you sir are credit to team

You got a cool offbeat-like sound there with your synth and drums. I don't like the samples you are using, but the rhythm you have there is interesting.

let me guess you haven't got a synth keyboard or any midi input device?

Not to bad for a first attempt, though i would recommend adding some bass drums/synthesizers to the song to fill out the silences.

stop bumping