Untitled Zombie Horror - General

Well I'm writing a Zombie Horror... uhm, book. I need a name - but do you guys think the below is a good beginning? [img]http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/4332/88464969.jpg[/img] [url]http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/4332/88464969.jpg[/url] - if it is all small

Johnny, can you think of even more generic name? And is it really needed to add 32"? I think reader won't need to know that, unless it has some purpose. Oh and, "Disease spread only by a bit is being spread. Don't use same word more than once in the same sentence.

[QUOTE=johanz;17755785]Johnny, can you think of even more generic name? And is it really needed to add 32"? I think reader won't need to know that, unless it has some purpose.[/QUOTE] The real question is can he think of a more generic way to introduce the zombie apocalypse?

[QUOTE=sebbonaparta;17755815]The real question is can he think of a more generic way to introduce the zombie apocalypse?[/QUOTE] Can you? Chances are, you will know about it on TV first. Unless you're in the infected area. Sure, it could be better, but that's not the most flawed part.

Thanks guys - I'm gonna change it. Johanz got a good other name for Johnny?

[QUOTE=Juggernog;17755900]Thanks guys - I'm gonna change it. Johanz got a good other name for Johnny?[/QUOTE] Jeez, just google boy names and choose something less generic.

Powell... Powell is now Johnny! [editline]03:25PM[/editline] Revision + New page [img]http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/4332/88464969.jpg[/img] [url]http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/4332/88464969.jpg[/url] - if it comes out all small [editline]03:26PM[/editline] I love the advertisment "Horror Fans - Dating Geek 2 Geek is the site for you" *really not hot picture of a woman of at least 40*

You have any idea's on what's going to happen after that?

It still says "Jonny wasn't quite sure what to expect," at the beginning

Oh - I'll fix that Jojje, thanks. @MachiniOs - I'm not spoiling what's happening after this, but I do know.

It kinda gets rather interesting. But at the same time a bit dumb. There's a zombie infection, but lol, I won't call the cops. And cop's reply was awful. Did they not know about the infection or what?

[QUOTE=johanz;17757564]It kinda gets rather interesting. But at the same time a bit dumb. There's a zombie infection, but lol, I won't call the cops. And cop's reply was awful. Did they not know about the infection or what?[/QUOTE] He thought he was joking him about, which is why he didn't call the cops. The cops reply was awful, yes, but as a cop, when zombies have only just started transforming, would you know about it, when it just happened and you're in an office?

[QUOTE=Juggernog;17757667]He thought he was joking him about, which is why he didn't call the cops. The cops reply was awful, yes, but as a cop, when zombies have only just started transforming, would you know about it, when it just happened and you're in an office?[/QUOTE] If it is shown on tv, then yes, I suppose police would be informed.

Im pretty sure it'd go eye witness > Police > News so the policewoman's reply a little more convincing like that there were no available units in the area?

I know I know, next he goes to his friend chuck?

[HIGHLIGHT]WHYYY JOHNNY?[/HIGHLIGHT] Also, i thin "zombie" and "horror" will work togeher as well as "twilight fans" and "bomb activated by faggotry" Thangyouverymutch.

Its cool

You all like it so far? OK - I'll continue it further. [editline]08:28AM[/editline] I'll change the police womens reply then [editline]08:28AM[/editline] Hmmm - actually I won't