[media]http://soundcloud.com/frenchies/dead-pixel[/media]
rather finished this quickly cause I wanted to do something else.
any thoughts?
Very cool! Love that saw bass
[QUOTE=tlsaudrl2548;44507046][media]http://soundcloud.com/frenchies/dead-pixel[/media]
rather finished this quickly cause I wanted to do something else.
any thoughts?[/QUOTE]
Sounds really nice overall. That saw bass is interesting, because it's not super heavy but it does well on its own, so nice work with that. The only problem I have here is a problem I have with tons of tracks... I would encourage you to try to stay away from that three-chord progression at 2.45. It's okay to do if you haven't gotten comfortable with writing more interesting chords, but I think staying away from overused chord progressions will help your tracks become better overall. But besides that, I can tell you've gotten the basics down on lots of things like mixing and sound arrangement, so nice work!
[QUOTE=lawlavex;44540497]Sounds really nice overall. That saw bass is interesting, because it's not super heavy but it does well on its own, so nice work with that. The only problem I have here is a problem I have with tons of tracks... I would encourage you to try to stay away from that three-chord progression at 2.45. It's okay to do if you haven't gotten comfortable with writing more interesting chords, but I think staying away from overused chord progressions will help your tracks become better overall. But besides that, I can tell you've gotten the basics down on lots of things like mixing and sound arrangement, so nice work![/QUOTE]
Thanks for criticism. I was tired of making this track (took me about a week and I wanted to do something else...) and messed up.
I'll take your advise.
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