[video=youtube;nrBP0--Rnpw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nrBP0--Rnpw[/video]
This is a short film I made a few weeks ago. Hope you guys like it. Feedback is definitely welcome. :)
Cutting between each character as they had their line of dialogue just interrupted any sort of flow that existed.
Aaand, yeah. It just wasn't good. Acting felt bad, and the whole joke itself was just not funny and extremely generic.
i guess it was ruined because i have the exact same [sp]backgammon case[/sp].
shoot in a place with less wind
check the focus on the camera
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