• Suei's Training. (Quick little WIP.)
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In the midst of war, one man known as Suei had taken to the arts of defense. He wished to destroy the entire Orcish horde with his brothers which he would serve with. With this passion to destroy the ‘Horde’, he set forth to train, and that is where this grand story of perseverance begins. Chapter 1 – The Training of a Wizard Suei ran to back to his chambers, he had forgotten one of the most important spell books he would need to learn the ways which he had studied in his childhood for the longest time. Rushing through the elegant city of Dalaran, the wizard capital of Azeroth. This young teenager hoped that he would not be too late, for his superior would call off his training for two days, which for him was learning one more spell and using it right. When he had finally gotten back to his chambers, a little surprise had rendered him stunned for a moment or two. His master had appeared, teleported you could say right into the middle of his chambers, along with all of his spell books perfectly set out. He was merely dazed by what his master had done for him. He never allowed Suei to be late, because of his love for being right on time. As his master said something about wisdom, Suei checked to see if he would learn anything new, and he would. He would now begin to learn how to use the Arcane, a section of Magic. DO NOT HATE IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT. Besides, i'm not butthurt, and it's not done. [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Shit thread, wrong section, telling people to GTFO and starting to shitpost later in the thread." - Orkel))[/highlight]
This thread literally has no purpose and if anything is in the wrong section.
damn man is there some where u can sell this fanfic to me? i sorta want to make a poster on my wall with it alongside my anime wallscrolls
What.
You serious Ralbane? And it has a reason to be here, i'm merely posting what I wrote.
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262123]You serious Ralbane? And it has a reason to be here, i'm merely posting what I wrote.[/QUOTE] ya it really needs to go up next to my wall scrolls and dbz (most goku and vegeta lol OVER 9000!) action figures
... Not gonna lie, that was pretty terrible.
I can't believe you actually like it! I mean, I might have to give it to my 8th grade english teacher on my first day once its done but...if you want it, I guess you could have it with my permission for a single dollar, or free. I don't know, people don't actually like my stuff usually.
Of course you rate my post dumb because you can't take criticism.
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262174]I can't believe you actually like it! I mean, I might have to give it to my 8th grade english teacher on my first day once its done but...if you want it, I guess you could have it with my permission for a single dollar, or free. I don't know, people don't actually like my stuff usually.[/QUOTE] it's pretty clear to me that you are a christopher paolini in the rough he made books that were turned into movies man!! eragon was the book of a decade you could be next
Meh, go ahead and hate. I'm not here for criticism from a person I have never met.
This guy is way better than whoever is writing the Warcraft books currently.
[quote=Flameliker's youtube page]Books: Arthas: Rise of The Lichking, Anything with a WARCRAFT label slaped on it. [/quote] Please never write any sort of literature again.
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262218]Meh, go ahead and hate. I'm not here for criticism from a person I have never met.[/QUOTE] yeah you just wanted positive responses from people you never met
All fanfics must have sex, so this is not a proper fanfic
Are you a master author
Thanks Kinglah. And I only read them for lore, "mad skillz11". Your name makes me think you don't even read for a pass time.
[QUOTE=KingNick220;30262249]All fanfics must have sex, so this is not a proper fanfic[/QUOTE] \ needs moar spyroxcynder rrerrr
Like the title said, WORK IN PROGRESS. It'll have sex soon, or romantic relationships.
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262269]Thanks Kinglah. And I only read them for lore, "mad skillz11". Your name makes me think you don't even read for a pass time.[/QUOTE] I read R.A. Salvatore, H.P. Lovecraft, J.K. Rowling, Dean Koontz, Stephen King, J.R. Tolkien, Eric Nylund, and many other authors.
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262300]Like the title said, WORK IN PROGRESS. It'll have sex soon, or romantic relationships.[/QUOTE] don't let all these [i]plebs[/i] stifle your own creativity please write chapter two asap with no influence from these Non Writers!!
and this still is about as fun to read as a paper on how to remove your own testicles with only a rusty knife and some cheap dental anesthetic. [editline]5th June 2011[/editline] Also, this is the wrong section. The entirety of FP is the wrong section. There is no place for this stuff. Go to a fanfiction site.
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262269]Thanks Kinglah. And I only read them for lore, "mad skillz11". Your name makes me think you don't even read for a pass time.[/QUOTE] He meant that they are so bad that everyone can write them. This requires no skills at all. You have to be more creative. Also you mentioned that you don't want criticism from people you don't know. Do you want criticism from people that you know then? That makes no sense, of course the people you know will say that they like it because they know you and are your friends. The point is that you have to get criticism from random people.
[QUOTE=Strongbad;30262308]I read R.A. Salvatore, H.P. Lovecraft, J.K. Rowling, Dean Koontz, Stephen King, J.R. Tolkien, Eric Nylund, and many other authors.[/QUOTE] Oh lord, I didn't even say your name.
Mods please don't lock this thread. I want to see where this goes.
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262300]Like the title said, WORK IN PROGRESS. It'll have sex soon, or romantic relationships.[/QUOTE] Heck yeah!
I don't even know Ralbane..
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262354]Oh lord, I didn't even say your name.[/QUOTE] You do not need to speak the name of The Strongbad to summon him. This thread needed my influence. Also to prove that anyone can write this [quote]Jason Largecock ran to his quarters and grabbed his sword. The captain shouted "To the front!" at him. Jason Largecock ran to his captain and saluted. "Sir, yes, sir!" then he got an erection and kissed the captain, they tumbled onto the bed. Then the closet door creaked open and a skeleton popped out. THE END (WIP lolol)[/quote]
[QUOTE=Flameliker;30262300]Like the title said, WORK IN PROGRESS. It'll have sex soon, or romantic relationships.[/QUOTE] FP is now interested.
[QUOTE=Strongbad;30262403]You do not need to speak the name of The Strongbad to summon him. This thread needed my influence. Also to prove that anyone can write this[/QUOTE] You forgot the hyper-realistic part!
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