(Based on the Super Mario World creepypasta.) This is my first creepypasta so sorry if it's not that scary..
Once there was a gamer who was an obsessive player of FPS's. Return to Castle Wolfenstein was his favorite one of them all. He would play it 24/7 nonstop. He'd stay up until midnight just to play it. He would memorize every level and could say them by heart. He knew everyone of the characters and what they did. He knew it all
Then time came for college. The boy couldn't bring his Xbox with him so he sadly left it in his attic, along with RTCW. There it sat until the boy came back in the summer after graduating.
The first thing on his mind was RTCW. He qucikly made his way up to the attic and grabbed his Xbox collection. The strange thing is, the game box hadn't had a single piece of dust on it, unlike every other thing in there. He went to his room, hooked the Xbox up, and then fired up RTCW.
But there was something different about the game.
On the mission select screen, there was a skull next to every level icon. The background, instead of it's raining background, was all red. But what caught his eye most was an extra level on the menu. He knew it wasn't there last time. There was no name for it just ???. Being curious he selected the level.
The level had BJ being parachuted onto the side of a ruined mansion. What was surprising was that there was no music. All there was just random splices of screams. As BJ made his way into the mansion, things were different. There was no one there. Everything was quiet.
Further through the level, BJ came to a table where a radio stood. BJ activated the radio, expecting just some German babble. But instead there was ultra-loud static coming through it. Then there was high pitched screaming. It blasted through the TV speakers and began to hurt the boy's ears. He went to turn the volume down but the noise didn't go down, it just went up higher and higher. Then suddenly, a voice came through. It sounded like a frightened soldier.
"OH MY GOD! HELLLLP! SOMEONE! THEY'RE COMING FOR YOU! RUN NOW BEFORE THE.....AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!
The radio went silent as did everything. But then suddenly, the lights went off and BJ was alone in darkness for several long seconds. Then suddenly a torch lit up to the side that reveled a long hallway that had not been there. Torches to both sides of the wall lit up and they panned down the hallway revealing an almost infinite long hallway.
BJ kept moving down to a door which he could see in the distance. The hallway seemed like it went on forever. That's when things started to go bad. There was loud screams coming from all direction. They grew louder and louder to the point where the boy turned the audio off.
But the sound still came.
Further down, images began popping on the screen. They were in-game soldiers being eaten by zombies. But they were drawn VERY realistically and made it look like it was real. Then the screen began to shake and a demonic voice began to shout the boy's name.
"JANE! JANE! YOU'RE GONNA DIE! JANE! JANE!"
The demonic voice kept playing as BJ reached the end of the hallway. He opened the door and a cutscene played.
The cutscene showed BJ from the back walking slowly into a pitch black room. Then the door shut and there was nothing but total darkness. Then the demonic voice came laughing as with others as BJ began to scream. Then suddenly a picture popped up on the screen that made the boy fall back on his chair.
It was a still picture of BJ's severed head only this time it was drawn very realistically and you could see every detail.
Then the demonic voice came back in::
"YOUR GONNA DIE! YOUR GONNA DIE!"
Then the screen went black. The Xbox began shaking and the screen began rattling. Then a loud laughter came: HAHAHAHAH!
The boy got up out of his chair, ripped open the CD holder, crumbled the CD into several pieces and threw it along with the case into his fireplace.
He felt weak and stumbled onto his bed where he just laid there, trying to stay sane. A few minutes later his mom came in and noticed the Xbox on.
"Oh you already hooked it up? My aren't you anxious. I put your game downstairs when I cleaned the attic a while ago so it would get dusty. Hope your happy" Then she left.
If the game was downstairs, what was that he just played?
Not creepy
Your == possessive.
You're == contraction of "you are"
Learn the fucking difference.
BJ Blazkowicz Meets the Ahnenerbe?
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ahnenerbe[/url]
Horrible start.
'Once there was a....'
What the hell is [I]that?[/I]
[QUOTE=Triumph Forks;23193719]No john[/QUOTE]
You are the nazis
I didn't find it creepy, and I find a lot of things creepy :saddowns:
The exact opposite of creepy.
Sorry if it's bad. Pretty much every other scary thing is from a website. I was just trying to be original. But I guess I'll stick with the articles.
no, john. you are the demons
the scariest part was the grammar
Why would he scream "YOU'RE GONNA DIE"?
That's something a 12-year old would say to harass his friends, not a demon. :frog:
It was ok, but not the greatest.
I was expecting a better story, dude. :(
But then who was xbox
Well, I guess writing just isn't your... [b]Game[/b]
:smug:
We should have a sub-forum down in Art and shit like that dedicated to creepy-pasta
[QUOTE=Braww;23195382]Well, I guess writing just isn't your... [b]Game[/b]
:smug:[/QUOTE]
Well I'm good at writing, just not at horror.
are we allowed to make threads over pasta?
cause I have a ton of shit to dump if you can
[QUOTE=zenhorse;23196060]Well I'm good at writing, just not at horror.[/QUOTE]
Show us what else you have written.
[QUOTE=hey5000;23196293]Show us what else you have written.[/QUOTE]
I agree with this statement, show us that you're not as bad as we think you are based on this story.
[QUOTE=hey5000;23196293]Show us what else you have written.[/QUOTE]
Well I haven't written anything here, but I do know how to write good stuff. It's just that horror writing isn't my thing.
[quote=zenhorse;23193633]if the game was downstairs, what was that he just played?[/quote]
Then who was game?!
[QUOTE=zenhorse;23196394]Well I haven't written anything here, but I do know how to write good stuff. It's just that horror writing isn't my thing.[/QUOTE]
So you said you're a good writer, but you have nothing to show for it? or is it not on a computer but on paper somewhere?
[QUOTE=zenhorse;23196394]Well I haven't written anything here, but I do know how to write good stuff. It's just that horror writing isn't my thing.[/QUOTE]
Rate disagree, OP is full of himself and a liar
I think that every single person who posts in this thread, if they tried, could write better creepypasta than this; or anything the OP could whip up.
Once up on a tiem OP died
THE END :downs:
But then who was phone?
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