Sup guys? Made this in a few hours and thought it was pretty good. This is i think my 3rd or 4th time using my bamboo tablet.
crit please
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Scares the shit outta me because it looks horrible painful.
The clouds look incredibly half ass'd.
I think you should have spent more time on it before submitting it. Design by human's shirts are thoroughly finished and clean. This design looks like you started working on one spot and then stopped because you couldn't get it the way you wanted it. The spot I'm talking about is the eyelid itself.
[QUOTE=onox37;22151218]The clouds look incredibly half ass'd.
I think you should have spent more time on it before submitting it. Design by human's shirts are thoroughly finished and clean. This design looks like you started working on one spot and then stopped because you couldn't get it the way you wanted it. The spot I'm talking about is the eyelid itself.[/QUOTE]
what about the eyelid looks unfinished?
Sorry man, my honest opinion is... It's horrible.
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Weird as hell. You shouldn't put that on a shirt, that has to be a vector if it's going on a shirt.
Looks...odd. Something just doesn't feel right,
That's just gross.
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the clouds are ugly as hell..just get real pictures of clouds then paste them in
i would not buy that on a shirt, this needs some serious work
It's not bad but if anybody would even want to consider that on a shirt, you need to work more on it. Judging by the angle the eye is facing, the pupil needs to be a little more to the left, and make it look actually round, as well as the iris. Eyelashes don't look like eyelashes at all - too straight and should face a little forward. The melting part needs to be redone, and maybe make the veins a little more detailed (ramifications and such). A highlight would be nice too. Try using some custom brushes for clouds or just paste them from somewhere else.
needs some serious work....I don't think I could see anyone wearing that shirt.
I'd put the eye higher and remove the clouds
the clouds make it look ugly
[QUOTE=Seer;22179727]It's not bad but if anybody would even want to consider that on a shirt, you need to work more on it. Judging by the angle the eye is facing, the pupil needs to be a little more to the left, and make it look actually round, as well as the iris. Eyelashes don't look like eyelashes at all - too straight and should face a little forward. The melting part needs to be redone, and maybe make the veins a little more detailed (ramifications and such). A highlight would be nice too. Try using some custom brushes for clouds or just paste them from somewhere else.[/QUOTE]
yeah i know for a shirt it was rushed. but thanks for actually giving me some tips
I find it odd that the eyelashes on the right side of the upper eyelid are pointing inward while the rest are pointing outward. Other than that I think it's pretty good.
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