All right i draw'd this cute girl. - General

Yes she's my friend. I made a vectorial version of her (And it's my first try!). Took me 3 days, and i made with two versions. I've done all of this shit, the cloth folds, the skin lighting and the hair, i liked how was done the hair. I'll put the photos URLs. She doesn't like to be seen over the internet. Of course she doesn't know facepunch, but just in case :tinfoil: Photos and the draw for some comparison: [URL=http://i23.pan.tuenti.com/i/5/600/-/E/Gp5QDB_8KdqyQnORIP3.0.jpg]#1: Used this photo for her hair and face details.[/url] [url=http://im605.ll.tuenti.com/i59/i/7/600/O/N/y1HNOYy6JtwYhnLRN0z.0.jpg]#2: Her clothes are used in the draw.[/url] [url=http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/3265/albyfinalverison.png]Dat draw![/url] I gave it to her and she loved it. C'mon R&C.

Broken links.

You got to be kidding. It works fine for me. Should i reupload the photos?

Only the final loads for me. I don't like it. The anatomy is wrong. Your head is ~1/8 of your body. The head there looks to be ~1/5. Females tend to have slender shoulders, she kind of looks like a football player there. Her body itself is super..flat. Unless she's like under 12 or extremely under-developed she'd have some sort of "boobage". I'm not sure what's going on in the background..

Yea, only this one works: [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/3265/albyfinalverison.png[/img] Work on your anatomy please. [editline]04:51AM[/editline] arms don't bend that many times

Oh, another thing. Her eyebrows are very strong and her hair is very..flat. Overall, look at how to draw people.

I didn't know we had another joint close to the shoulder there! Let me try bendin- OH GOD IT HURTS!

I was suprised when I opened it, and verily so. With the refererral images and such, I wasn't expecting any product of that level. Ohkay, you need to go back to 101. You did alot of shit here you don't know how they are really done. you dind't even break stuff into shapes. Here's a place to start out with: [url]www.drawspace.com[/url] Start by reading the first tutorials, and act accordingly.

The first two links don't work, I got your pic though...it'd be interesting to see your ref. More or less, her head is way to big...or her body is way too small. Very dispropotionate. Her right (from her view) arm is just blobby and weird then cuts into a shoulder, it's like, what? Have you never seen a person's arm before? Her left shoulder just...juts out. Above post is right, learn your anatomy basics. LOOK at people, don't just draw and guess, visualise the SHAPE. The face is alright, creepy, but alright. I don't understand why there is a gap in her hair from her face - is she bald at the back? Glasses have been done pretty well :D

[QUOTE=PerryMason;20054039]Yea, only this one works: [IMG]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/3265/albyfinalverison.png[/IMG] Work on your anatomy please. [editline]04:51AM[/editline] arms don't bend that many times[/QUOTE] oh god that's so hilariously bad [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Encourage and Advise" - Perfumly))[/highlight]

You're kidding, right? Right? [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Encourage and Advise" - Perfumly))[/highlight]

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[Quote]I gave it to her and she loved it. [/Quote] .

Oh christ. I love you Creationism Corner.