I have been posting my raps for the past few months and getting your advice on how to improve, I wanted to give it one last try so I took what you had to say and I totally re-made the last rap I was working on, it has basically the same lyrics just different tempo and beat and I tried singing a little bit in some parts.
So I was wondering if you could listen to my old and new rap and tell me if I got better or worse....
And if the song is good enough yet that I should make a video for my youtube account or if you still have criticisms for me to work out.
[url]http://www.reverbnation.com/mcsquaredmusic[/url]
thank you so much for your time and honesty, I really appreciate it.
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You are raping who now?
[editline]14th December 2010[/editline]
:v:
I thougt rap had died out in the mainstream by now
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26704801]I have been posting my raps for the past few months and getting your advice on how to improve, I wanted to give it one last try so I took what you had to say and I totally re-made the last rap I was working on, it has basically the same lyrics just different tempo and beat and I tried singing a little bit in some parts.
So I was wondering if you could listen to my old and new rap and tell me if I got better or worse....
And if the song is good enough yet that I should make a video for my youtube account or if you still have criticisms for me to work out.
[url]http://www.reverbnation.com/mcsquaredmusic[/url]
thank you so much for your time and honesty, I really appreciate it.[/QUOTE]
It seems you didn't really take TH89's advice.
doesnt sound too good, imo its monotonous
You should just wrap it up, and call it quits.
Mcsquaredmusic, your a gangsta unit with a name like that.
She speaks from hard and heartbreaking life of the streets. I feel the pain.
Don't listen to these people, it's just the man trying to bring you down.
[QUOTE=TheDiddler;26704881]She speaks from hard and heartbreaking life of the streets. I feel the pain.
RISE ABOVE, MAN![/QUOTE]
"all I eat is poptarts and cheezies, I have type 2 diabetes"
I have all the bitches.
[QUOTE=KingNick220;26704867]Mcsquaredmusic, your a gangsta unit with a name like that.[/QUOTE]
More like MCrap.
You sound very awkward when you rap. Ride the beat a bit better also.
you have to shoot people and be shot at to be a good rapper duh
Sometimes when you sing, it sounds out of key with the Canon in D you have ghettoized in the background.
No one wants to hear trash talk rap from a female.
The only really successful female hip hop artists rapped about sex and then more sex
and acted like it
[QUOTE=not_Morph53;26704931]More like MCrap.[/QUOTE]
Well my real name is Kate, so I think K-rap would be better.
Wow cool raps mnan !!
WOW that was fucking lame
LOL
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26704964]Well my real name is Kate, so I think K-rap would be better.[/QUOTE]
Wait, what?
I got served.
sounds like your talking not raping
[QUOTE=pedroion;26705028]To be really sincere, you need to add some editing or something to your voice.
Don't be offended, but your voice is boring. It has no personality, you know.
[editline]15th December 2010[/editline]
you're hot tho you can always try to be a model[/QUOTE]
Are you suggesting I auto-tune it like t-pain?
I guess kesha has no tallent and she is famous, maybe its the autotune.
[QUOTE=CubeManv2;26705045]sounds like your talking not raping[/QUOTE]
haha my intentions are not to rape.
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26705071]haha my intentions are not to rape.[/QUOTE]
I think he meant rap. More likely then not, I'm wrong.
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26705071]haha my intentions are not to rape.[/QUOTE]
You raped my ears.
You sound uninterested. Maybe pick a better subject matter too because the "I'm so cool and clever is pretty boring." I don't know about you but my favorite rap songs always had passion with lyrics that actually meant something to them instead of trying to be clever and witty. After all Hip Hop is meant to be more than "Look guise,I rap. I'm cool right?"
Well its supposed to be a comedy rap its meant to be used for a youtube video, its not something I am releasing on a cd or will be preforming live or anything, it's just for giggles.
For the purpose of a youtube video is it good enough to be bearable?
give up
[editline]14th December 2010[/editline]
it's painful to listen to
Is the new one at least an improvement from the old one?
[QUOTE=Obe1kenobi;26705198]Is the new one at least an improvement from the old one?[/QUOTE]
The difference between a F and a D-.
That was better than I expected.
But still atrocious.
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MC pee pants
Also where do you get the background music. Fairly certain the new ones background is already a song. I hate rap that is like i have hoes and moneys cos am gangsta though also lines like"You can just fucking blow me" make me go :(
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