Just Another Song (Wip) - General

This is What I'm Dong At the moment. I'd like some C&C and Improovement Tips I know that I have to change the Kick and that the effect's reverb is too loud and long but I can't change them at the moment because I got to go to the Fire Brigade training now. [url=http://www.dump.no/files/0aa8f183cebd/Antraxx_-_To_The_Godz_(Intro_WIP).mp3]Listen (WIP1)[/url] It's Pretty basic and there is not much going on now. [url=http://www.dump.no/files/0aa8f183cebd/Antraxx_-_To_The_Godz_%28Intro_WIP_2%29.mp3]Listen (WIP2)[/url] I think The Screech Is A Little off place and a bit too loud [url=http://www.dump.no/files/0aa8f183cebd/Antraxx_-_To_The_Godz_3.mp3]Listen (WIP3)[/url] Changed Volume [url=http://www.dump.no/files/0aa8f183cebd/Antraxx_-_To_Be_Announced_%28Preview%29.mp3]Listen (WIP4)[/url] Added Part of the Melo [url=http://www.dump.no/files/0aa8f183cebd/Antraxx_-_To_The_Godz.mp3]Listen (WIP5)[/url] Ended Song. Unmastered Unfinished.

4/4 bass drum and random noises. Are you for real?

As I said It's a Hardstyle Track beginning i just started and I was searching for some Screeches / Noize that i could throw in addotionally to the bassline.

kinda catchy i like it :D

Added another Wip [editline]07:11PM[/editline] Another Wip

Don't tell me you call yourself "Antraxx". Saw that in the URL. Everybody knows about [url=http://www.scantraxx.com/]Scantraxx[/url].

[QUOTE=Fan-Fanatic;17430161]I'd like some C&C and Improovement Tips[/QUOTE] Well, for starters, we have a music WIP thread: [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=660871[/url] So you can bump that with your random unfinished crap rather than dedicate threads to stuff you're undoubtedly going to post again later. As far as your actual music...your kick sounds fluffy initially, the "melody" is boring as hell, the breaks are too few and far between, and it's [i]way too fucking long[/i] for how little you mix it up.

[QUOTE=trogdor6666;17436210]Don't tell me you call yourself "Antraxx". Saw that in the URL. Everybody knows about [url=http://www.scantraxx.com/]Scantraxx[/url].[/QUOTE] It's Antraxx because I like that name and it shouldnt actually be related to Scantraxx but more to my DJ name : DJ Antraxx (Could've written it with thrax but traxx is better in my opinion.)