Yo. Thing I did. Gonna update later to fix shit like no shadow from umbrella.
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i think you need to bring out the rider a little more, you could add a touch of glow to him.
It's a really painting though.
Very nice, but too dark. It looks like the characters are there at night, contradicting the daytime environment.
Why is there no reflection of light in the middle of the desert?
Well, knowing you this is such an early stage that it's almost what you could call a sketch, a concept sketch that is.
If you think of this as a nearly finished product then you need to be strangled.
Looking forward to the progress.
Nice style. Definitely needs some highlights though - the lighting is very flat and dark for a desert.
Very painting i like it
I think the umbrella has an odd perspective unless it's tilted forward. The bird's legs look strange as well. Hoping to see this improve.
Quite painting.
This is pretty much the most painting I've ever seen
On a scale of 1 - painting i'd say it's a painting.
Love the colour tho.
The characters look like cut outs specially the birds feathers just being straight edge hair strands
But it looks great regardless
Welcome back Lord m.
This is a very digi paiting.
Lord M! I missed you so much! :buddy:
Unfortunately I must agree with my colleagues, the character itself doesn't blend very well with the environment. It's too dark, the light should be hitting it directly.
It would look good in a hair salon.
looks like a chocobo.
First off:
the lighthouse on which you placed so much empashis on in the title is not important at all in the painting
Second
The bird looks like it's floating, and like there's a gaping hole in the feathers. ALso it's left foot looks incredebly flat, and I'd pick a bit on the sand being tad bit too boring and undetailed in the foreground but that's just me.
You might've been experimenting with those colours or some shit, but they look godawful and overgammaed on that bird and mandudething. Everything else is fine, just generic desert landskape with way too much clouds, and it works magnificently well.
I have no useful tips on how to improve in which ways tough.
But you're lord fucking M, YFIO.
The umbrella looks a bit odd - out of place perhaps?\
The bird's legs need definition.
My main problem/question. Why's a lighthouse on during the day?
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