(POEM) An effigy to my old friend - VERY GOOD - VERY BASED

[Chomby]

Hello friends, I just wanted some opinions on a new poem. I am working on both lyricism and vocal delivery of the poem. I hope you enjoy this narration of a new poem by Chomby, who misses his old friend dearly.
[url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/63645401/TheLife%28RESPECTFULEDITEDVERSION%29.mp3[/url]
Thank you.

[Rediscover]

THIS IS EMOTION EXPRESSED IN ITS PUREST FORM... LIL B "THE BASEDGOD" WOULD BE PROUD

[Chomby]

[QUOTE=Rediscover;34822772]THIS IS EMOTION EXPRESSED IN ITS PUREST FORM... LIL B "THE BASEDGOD" WOULD BE PROUD[/QUOTE]

Thanks man it was influenced by the loss of a great friend

[JimmyRobot]

Now put it over a beat.

[Chomby]

[QUOTE=JimmyRobot;34823183]Now put it over a beat.[/QUOTE]

I often vocalize over beats, but for respects for my old friend I thought beats would draw attention away from the main focal-point, the lyrics. I wanted the listener to feel the emotion I was trying to convey, and putting it over a beat just wouldn't do it. Thanks for the input though. :)

[JimmyRobot]

No, really, put it over a beat. It really makes it more emotional for some.

[Chomby]

If you can supply the beat I suppose I could. I'd rather start from scratch with a beat though.

[FurrFagsMurr]

You should have immortal technique rap this.
If anyone knows what I mean.

Great poem though mate, It put a heavy wage on my heart.
Sorry about your friend as well.

[YugiReggie]

Yugi!!!! ^+^ :rock:

[JimmyRobot]

I can supply with a beat, yes. But just a really simple one.

Making it now, you lyrical skills are great and i think your rap might just become fucking beautiful.