A few pictures i had lying around on my floor, not too sure if i shoulda put theese in the "creative work that doesnt deserve a thread" part of the site, whatever though.
KAT: [IMG]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x414/madg23/scan0005.jpg[/IMG]
EMILE: [IMG]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x414/madg23/scan0006.jpg[/IMG]
JUN: [IMG]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x414/madg23/scan0004.jpg[/IMG]
CARTER: [IMG]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x414/madg23/scan0001.jpg[/IMG]
The Cole Protocol Book Cover: [IMG]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x414/madg23/scan0003.jpg[/IMG]
Halo CE Box Cover: [IMG]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x414/madg23/scan0002.jpg[/IMG]
for some reason when i scanned theese pictures the whole picture got lighter when it was supposed to be darker.
Erm, I'm afraid these should have gone in the 'creative work that doesnt deserve a thread' thread.
To be brutally honest, these need a LOT of work, whilst you have some artistic ability the proportions look messed up, please use a ruler when drawing necessary straight lines as all the guns look flacid. But don't give up! As they say 'Practice makes perfect.'
The last two traces?
If you made a thread you gons keep it. I'll give you some crits later, I'm busy now but they're all quite horrid. I'll explain later why and how to improve.
[i]Curve the bullet[/i]
[img]http://imgur.com/zoW0J.png[/img]
did you draw over screenshots? because they're horrible.
[editline]19th March 2011[/editline]
you have no sense of perspective and anatomy whatsoever.
You're not helping anybody.
Remember that it's actually supposed to be actual people inside those suits.
And people dont look like that. You've gotta understand how human anatomy works before you cloth them
Look up basic tutorials on drawspace.com, find some loomis book and look up additional human tutorials on deviantart if you have the need to. Should keep you busy for a while. Focus on getting the proportions and skeletons right first, once they start to resemble somethnig human shift focus to anatomy and such. Draw from photos.
if i tell him his perspective and anatomy sucks that means he must work on it, i'm telling him where to improve on.
[editline]19th March 2011[/editline]
and really it looks like he copied those from screenshots. except he didnt copy them properly.
It's all mushy. Fix the mushy.
I suggest you buy a ruler
ruler is a bad tool for drawing.
It's useful for perspective and drawing long straight things.
That's about it.
ITT: My halo abomination
[editline]24th March 2011[/editline]
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JUN: [img_thumb]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x414/madg23/scan0004.jpg[/img_thumb]
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Ahaha I nearly pissed myself, midget spartan
I thought they were okay :smile:
I didn't as per the reasons above.
[QUOTE=LieutenantLeo;28807812]I thought they were okay :smile:[/QUOTE]
ok for what? fire starting?
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