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[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/225/f/2/Get_up_by_PH3NF1X.png[/img] [img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/225/9/5/9516cf19d273c700ce97a27c48cc50ca.png[/img] [img]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/225/7/4/Project__Deadspace_by_PH3NF1X.png[/img] [img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/225/6/d/6d434a7e68c5f73fc5ae54d9b693f5f9.png[/img] The dead space one is pretty sketchy, But I'm still working on it, the last one was something I made in illustrator, I'm pretty happy with the result for it being simplistic.

Really interesting.

I don't know if anyone else noticed it, but the samurai reminds me of courage the cowardly dog. Thanks :)

That is seirously horrendously messy. And not even recent, seen most of that shit around, saw that parkour thing a few months ago even. You seem to have an idea of anatomy, but you still do stupid-ass fuckups, like on that rise one, that clot has 2 elbows, the dead space ones fingersaare all of same lenght and upper torso seems to be composed of random cancerous mass expanding at it's own will and I bitched enough about that parkour poser few months ago. Poses are creative but ruined by your bad sense of balance and fuckups in anatomy and proportions. You should continue drawing shit alongside with tutorials and use more reference images. Now with that done. can't you keep your fucking hand steady for once? Every line is a some random squiggly shit. Folds are just wherever you accidently happened to draw that line in - they make no sense nor reason whatsoever. Use cleaner lineart, right now that shit is ugly as hell. You can go back to that thing when you actually know what you're doing. Right now you're quite far from it. shading is unique in a sort, but most likely caused by your incompetence in knowledge of shading. Colours I like, you have a good nose for that.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24056447]That is seirously horrendously messy. And not even recent, seen most of that shit around, saw that parkour thing a few months ago even. You seem to have an idea of anatomy, but you still do stupid-ass fuckups, like on that rise one, that clot has 2 elbows, the dead space ones fingersaare all of same lenght and upper torso seems to be composed of random cancerous mass expanding at it's own will and I bitched enough about that parkour poser few months ago. Poses are creative but ruined by your bad sense of balance and fuckups in anatomy and proportions. You should continue drawing shit alongside with tutorials and use more reference images. Now with that done. can't you keep your fucking hand steady for once? Every line is a some random squiggly shit. Folds are just wherever you accidently happened to draw that line in - they make no sense nor reason whatsoever. Use cleaner lineart, right now that shit is ugly as hell. You can go back to that thing when you actually know what you're doing. Right now you're quite far from it. shading is unique in a sort, but most likely caused by your incompetence in knowledge of shading. Colours I like, you have a good nose for that.[/QUOTE] , like on that rise one, that clot has 2 elbows What does this mean exactly? I'll work on cleaner lines, anatomy and shading then.

Look at his left hand. LOOK! It starts from a short shoulder, goes on, BENDS goes up, then there's elbow and it goes on like normal.

I see what you mean. ... So what's some useful things for shading etc, I know about posematics.

It's too messy right now, you should define the way the body curves way more (detailed outlining) with the messy colouring. You should probably work some on your skills with the human anatomy, the idea you have is good, it falls short though because it looks really sloppy when the anatomy itself is pretty bad. So, I think you should draw some pretty detailed outlining, make it clean and then put some sloppy colouring over it (sticks out of the outlines, that kind of thing).

I'll work on that.

I do like it, it has a nice "abstract" feel to it. I'm not the biggest fan of the last picture and a few of the things just look a bit wrong (for example in the first picture his right hand appears to be bending back on itself,) but apart from that the style is something interesting, and seems an amalgamation of existing styles.