• A few bits and bops
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Just a simple pen sketch. I consider this a sort of rough concept sketch. She could become a sort of zombie/savage/experiment (Any good suggestions..?) [URL="http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7478/sketch2.png"][IMG]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7478/sketch2.th.png[/IMG][/URL] I personally like how I got most of the anatomy down, however I think I ruined it with the grey pens. [URL="http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1184/sketch1h.png"][IMG]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1184/sketch1h.th.png[/IMG][/URL] I made most of these sketches last night. I guess I'm better at masculine bodies when I'm overtired. [URL="http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6684/sketchx.png"][IMG]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6684/sketchx.th.png[/IMG][/URL] C+C would be appreciated.
Error 404, I could only open the first one. Your style is funky, kinda comicish, proprotions are bit stretched out, also her torso is from the frontial view, but the legs appear to be on the side view, or 3/4 view, which doesn't look very logical, kind of reminds of the egyptian pose. Fix the legs or the upper body, so it looks logical and work on her torso, it looks off balanced.
[QUOTE=Kagrs;20629052] [URL="http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7478/sketch2.png"][IMG]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7478/sketch2.th.png[/IMG][/URL] [URL="http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1184/sketch1h.png"][IMG]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1184/sketch1h.th.png[/IMG][/URL] [URL="http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6684/sketchx.png"][IMG]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6684/sketchx.th.png[/IMG][/URL] [/QUOTE] I fixed the links in their post. :geno: They concatenated a "/" onto a couple of the urls.
Ah thanks for fixing that - I edited my post. Thanks Fishsticks. I realize you're right - I couldn't quite put my finger on what it was I didn't entirely like about her but I think you pointed it out.
Good to hear, for the other works, they've also got strange proportions, be it too short legs or vice versa and the perspective on the face that's from an angle on the last page is off also. Now, I don't like telling people exactly what to do, for sometimes there are too many errors to point out, and secondly, I belive that you should work it out on your own when I give enough information and some tutorials, so use [url=http://cedarseed.deviantart.com/art/Big-Guid-to-Drawing-the-Body-15014442]this[/url] and if you want to draw from angles go to [url=http://www.posemaniacs.com]Posemaniacs[/url] So you need to work on your proportions, mostly.
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