Tell me what you think,i really need to know.Thanks.
By the way,the first 30 seconds are a random clip to get you started and the logo.So...dont quit there.
[media][url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=goW9f8QHlYQ[/url][/media]
terrible
[editline]09:47PM[/editline]
i watched like 30 seconds and i gave up jesus christ
I lol'd like crazy
What?
No.
That was just beyond random.
it was just fucking stupid.
Completely and utterly fucking retarded.
Not funny.
That wasn't funny at all.
geez...wtf...why dont people like it?
[QUOTE=Asd.;17282332]No.[/QUOTE]
This.
[QUOTE=Painkiller94;17283628]geez...wtf...why dont people like it?[/QUOTE]
Because it's shit?
[QUOTE=Negrul2;17283754]Because it's shit?[/QUOTE]
what didnt you like...particularly.I need good feedback,not lifeless scum trolling.So pls,explain.
By the way,the first 30 seconds are a random clip to get you started and the logo.So...
everytime i stumble upon something like this a part inside of me dies.
fucking bullshit man.
i feel like i died and went to hell
[QUOTE=Painkiller94;17283802]what didnt you like...particularly.I need good feedback,not lifeless scum trolling.So pls,explain.
By the way,the first 30 seconds are a random clip to get you started and the logo.So...[/QUOTE]
Were not trolling were giving you Feedback to improve it and atleast make it funny.
and please use media tags
Haah,such good feedback.You guys made my day.At least i laughed a bit. :D Hey MercWithMouth...thats not feedback everyone's giving me.They're like chris crocker bitching about britney spears.Give useful feedback...its not that bad,everyone else exept the users in this forum say it made them lol.They say its awesome.Why are ALL of you being so...arghhh...i dunno.
*edit*
know wut?nvm...i dont care
[QUOTE=Painkiller94;17286751]Haah,such good feedback.You guys made my day.At least i laughed a bit. :D Hey MercWithMouth...thats not feedback everyone's giving me.They're like chris crocker bitching about britney spears.Give useful feedback...its not that bad,everyone else exept the users in this forum say it made them lol.They say its awesome.Why are ALL of you being so...arghhh...i dunno.[/QUOTE]
You my good sir are an idiot.
[QUOTE=MercWithMouth;17287131]You my good sir are an idiot.[/QUOTE]
Yes i are.
[QUOTE=Painkiller94;17286751]Haah,such good feedback.You guys made my day.At least i laughed a bit. :D Hey MercWithMouth...thats not feedback everyone's giving me.They're like chris crocker bitching about britney spears.Give useful feedback...its not that bad,everyone else exept the users in this forum say it made them lol.They say its awesome.Why are ALL of you being so...arghhh...i dunno.
*edit*
know wut?nvm...i dont care[/QUOTE]
You want constructive feedback? Okay. Here's an analysis of the opening 1 minute and 30 seconds.
Painkiller utilizes the bizarre in a unique way, in order to immediately establish the absurdist nature of the piece. Through the use of a number of memetic-like sequences, he delivers to the audience a perception that is both slightly amusing and irritating. The constant flicker in the volume of audio (for example some sound effects being louder than others) is only matched by the crude and crass nature of the actual "fight" itself. To finally cement the movie as a piece of cinematic amateurism, and thus complete the effect, the health is displayed in the bottom left but, perhaps as a metaphor to signify the attempted quality, it is constantly set at a perfect 100% throughout the movie, perhaps attempting to instil a sense of perfectionism and style in the production.
The skull that one of the characters returns to is, perhaps, an attempt to signify the dominance. As soon as one character's dominion over the other is threatened (I.e. the skull is threatened) the characters begin an archaic attempt to control it, the fighting clearly being a metaphor for the crude political slander that had occurred in the recent presidential elections, and the entire film is quite easily a metaphor for politics.
There.
Criticism, bitch.
Incidentally, the people of this forum find something like this (Which is obviously amateurish and distinctly unfunny) to be simple and imbecile to the quality usually received. Compare your video with, say, "DasBoschitt"'s work, in which the crudeness is over-ruled by a distinct sense of purpose and intellectually superior comedy.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y2cxHYNMyyw[/media]
What's happening in that video, I can't understand
[QUOTE=gmaster;17288012]You want constructive feedback? Okay. Here's an analysis of the opening 1 minute and 30 seconds.
Painkiller utilizes the bizarre in a unique way, in order to immediately establish the absurdist nature of the piece. Through the use of a number of memetic-like sequences, he delivers to the audience a perception that is both slightly amusing and irritating. The constant flicker in the volume of audio (for example some sound effects being louder than others) is only matched by the crude and crass nature of the actual "fight" itself. To finally cement the movie as a piece of cinematic amateurism, and thus complete the effect, the health is displayed in the bottom left but, perhaps as a metaphor to signify the attempted quality, it is constantly set at a perfect 100% throughout the movie, perhaps attempting to instil a sense of perfectionism and style in the production.
The skull that one of the characters returns to is, perhaps, an attempt to signify the dominance. As soon as one character's dominion over the other is threatened (I.e. the skull is threatened) the characters begin an archaic attempt to control it, the fighting clearly being a metaphor for the crude political slander that had occurred in the recent presidential elections, and the entire film is quite easily a metaphor for politics.
There.
Criticism, bitch.
Incidentally, the people of this forum find something like this (Which is obviously amateurish and distinctly unfunny) to be simple and imbecile to the quality usually received. Compare your video with, say, "DasBoschitt"'s work, in which the crudeness is over-ruled by a distinct sense of purpose and intellectually superior comedy.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y2cxHYNMyyw[/media][/QUOTE]
I avoid comparing myself to giants...yea,thanks :D:D i actually found your post amusing lol
Ok,i'll make sure my next video's better.Thats all i wanted actually.Thanks.
[QUOTE=Painkiller94;17288232]I avoid comparing myself to giants...yea,thanks :D:D i actually found your post amusing lol
Ok,i'll make sure my next video's better.Thats all i wanted actually.Thanks.[/QUOTE]
Thank you. That was its intent.
[editline]08:21PM[/editline]
Incidentally, When I saw the title, I was thinking of this pain.
[img]http://www.mangaspoiler.com/img/2009/03/pain.jpg[/img]
He's a guy from naruto, incidentally.
*Gmaster prepares for the hail of "OMG KAWAII DESU FAG GTFO" comments*
If you can't bring someone into the room and have them understand what's going on then your piece is shit. I can't understand what's going on. Why was that one elite combine vomiting? Why was the normal one playing with a skull?(I assume playing with but he looked like he was skull fucking) Why were they fighting? Why did you use MS PAINT and COMIC SANS as the intro? Where did the gun come from? What was with the horrible sound effects? You should put EFFORT into something you post here.
you don't need a 30 second intro.
That is just stupid.
very...uh...incomprehensible
Unfunny.
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