Terrorism - A Poem - General

Well - I decided that I would write a poem about Terrorism, because I was not really that interested in doing anything else. When you see innocent people, so still, dead in the snow You realise how low some people will go When you turn on the TV, all the news is violence One thousand gunshots to break the silence You switch on the TV and shed a tear For your relative, your greatest fear So why would there be lists of dead Why should people be rattled with lead So take precautions to limit the skies To take vengance for those who died Try to prevent the bombing route Hope the next bomb is not a nuke. So why would you complain and moan When innocent people are ablown What if a terrorist was to commit suicide For every single young childs life. [b]Wrote that in about 10 minutes.[/b]

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Dashing through the sand With a bomb strapped to my back I have a Nasty plan For Christmas in Iraq I got through checkpoint A But not through checkpoint B That's when I got shot in the ass by the US Militery It's not funny! Oh, Jingle bombs Jingle bombs Mine blew off you see Where are all the virgins that Bin Laden promised me Jingle bombs, jingle bombs your soldiers shot me dead The only thing that I have left is this towel upon my head I used to be a man, but every time I cough Thanks to uncle Sam my nuts keep falling off My bombing days are done, I need to find some work Perhaps it would be much safer as a convenient store night clerk, Ooo, Jingle bombs, jingle bombs I think I got screwed Don't laugh at me because I'm dead or I kill you! I kill you! [img]http://www.whokilledbambi.co.uk/public/2008/05/achmed.png[/img]

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Oops - sorry. I'll remember to place it in the Creatism Corner next time.

Very good poem! Nice job settling the words. :)

[img]http://combatgamershq.com/cgwb/media/POTW/Left4Dead-Poetry_Hectic.jpg[/img] The rhyming seems a bit forced in places, but I was impressed by how much of it worked. Try to pick a less obvious topic next time, I think.

Somebody pick a topic. I find it extremely easy to write rhyming poetry

[QUOTE=Juggernog;18565021]Somebody pick a topic. I find it extremely easy to write rhyming poetry[/QUOTE] Red Dwarf.

Fried CHicken

[QUOTE=Juggernog;18565021]I find it extremely easy to write rhyming poetry[/QUOTE] Consider rap.

[QUOTE=Juggernog;18565021]Somebody pick a topic. I find it extremely easy to write rhyming poetry[/QUOTE] Not all poetry should be rhyming, you should try to use other methods. [editline]11:09PM[/editline] [QUOTE=tanthreecle;18565936]Consider rap.[/QUOTE] But don't just use ant shitty beats, and try to sound normal.Don't force it, lyrics need to flow.

Thanks, but no thanks. I've gone through the "Rap-obsession" stage of my life, and now I hate it. Also, [b]Red Dwarf[/b] In space with a hologram Who wants to show me boring diagrams Perhaps sometime we'll find Earth And once again frolic upon green turf But for now stuck in the Red Dwarf Where I get attacked by a poly-morph But for know stuck in space Even though I hate this place Written from the point of view of Dave Lister. [b]Fried Chicken[/b] Fried Chicken Good for lickin' Every single bone pickin' Did you ever think about how that fried chicken died What if you were killed by a guy, would you cry So why would you tug your tie And eat more chickens to ensure more chickens die.

Syllables are kinda messed up, you switch between the amount of syllables in a line a lot.

[QUOTE=Hiccuper;18589019]Syllables are kinda messed up, you switch between the amount of syllables in a line a lot.[/QUOTE] Is that a problem? If it flows, it's all good.

Write one about fritos corn chips and photoshop.

Seems like your inspired by dead alot :]