I made this for a film challenge that my school competes in with other schools in the state. The video had to be called Forgotten and it had to be under 3 minutes. Can anyone give me their opinions on it?
[url]https://youtu.be/SZ3idGAH3EE[/url]
You double posted like 12 minutes apart.
Yeah idk what happened but it got posted twice. I'm trying to delete the other thread
Not amazing, not awful.
Ending sucked, lacked any kind of conclusion
Shots where overlay messy
Lighting was dreadful and mismatched
Sound was alright for the most part but the background noise is ridiculous.
Idea was good, pacing was fine
Actors where pretty good
I liked the """subtle""" nod at the film's title
Overall you need to practice more, research about how lighting effects a films tone and take a long hard look at your audio
Yeah the ending could have used a little work. We ran out of time because of the 3 minute limit so we just had to end it within 25 seconds.
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