The lead synth with the delayed effect just doesn't fit the tempo of the song in my opinion. Maybe try adjusting the delay so it's in sync with the song? The general feel of the song is kind of cool though. The drums are a little too quiet at some parts though.
The drums are usually fine, probably just youtube bullshittery. I'll check on that.
That acid-bass sounding part that comes in at 0:25 is a little harsh - much louder than the higher timbre of the synth and kind of stuck out to me as distracting. Dunno how you've built it, but maybe filtering it creatively to make it occupy a deeper place in the track might be cool.
I also felt like there was a bit of disconnect between that slower descending synth line that goes through the song and the faster break-beak part. Seemed like they were conflicting to take the "feel" of the song and not working together too well. Maybe try coming out of that slower descending part during the break beat, or switching it up a bit? I liked the section after the breakbeats and I think it fits well there, so definitely hang on to it.
Ending needs a bang! I like the track but I either wasn't ready for that ending, or was waiting for more. I'm up too late and can't really think of anything in particular that might help but I think you're definitely going in the right direction with the track. Nice work.
Oh and:
[QUOTE=ZomBz;35394133]The drums are usually fine, probably just youtube bullshittery. I'll check on that.[/QUOTE]
That's more of a mastering issue than youtube's fault. What are you using for speakers?
Kinda cool. As mentioned, the lead doesn't work so well with the drums. Take it down a lot or do something different with it.
Drums majorly suck. You're meant to layer them with harder hitting samples.
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