Dark Souls Animation - General

What I am looking for now is for you guys to tell me what you think of it, I do know that I have to improve some things and I will list them below. PS: This "series" (I will probably only do 3 episodes) is about those annoying things in games, in this case with Dark Souls, the Ceaseless Discharge Boss. [video=youtube;_1Z303Ih9CA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_1Z303Ih9CA[/video] So the things that I am trying to improve are: -fluid animation -better script with a more focus on "funny" then just coming off as a rant -STOP being so lazy (ugh) -faster pace -avoid re-using frames so much The things that are ok (at least they seem ok to me, if you disagree tell me): -the sound management -the sets -(considering this was the first time that I made an animation with a humanoid character) the key-frames look alright (although I am still going to improve them) Hope you like it and tell me what you think :)

It wasn't half bad to be honest. I think that you've got potential if you work on the stuff you mentioned, but mostly the "funny" as opposed to the "rant". It wasn't funny so much as it wasn't boring so I'd kept watching, but it wasn't extremely entertaining. But, like I said, wasn't bad. I'm sure with enough time you'll get it right, since you seem to already know what to improve on.

Was pretty good. Not as funny as it could be. I'm not a fan of swearing in place of an actual joke. Animation is better than anything I could do and it was a consistent style throughout. I didn't notice reuse of frames. Skyrim joke was a bit lame. Overall A+ would watch again.

That was a pretty well done animation. I think the only thing that you could improve on is the voice acting. Also, I know you're doing a series on annoying video game parts, and I have to tell you this: there was a MUCH more annoying part about Dark Souls than the ceaseless discharge boss fight. I'm talking about those two silver knight-archers in that one damn area in Anor Londo. An animation on that would be hilarious.

[QUOTE=Bicko Blicko;34423879]That was a pretty well done animation. I think the only thing that you could improve on is the voice acting. Also, I know you're doing a series on annoying video game parts, and I have to tell you this: there was a MUCH more annoying part about Dark Souls than the ceaseless discharge boss fight. I'm talking about those two silver knight-archers in that one damn area in Anor Londo. An animation on that would be hilarious.[/QUOTE] If you have any INT, cast hidden body or whatever it is called. They won't see you until you are right on top of him. Kick him off the edge and run around. Simple.

Yeah the voice acting isn't very "believable", but the overall animation is quite nice!

[QUOTE=Lukasaurus;34424080]If you have any INT, cast hidden body or whatever it is called. They won't see you until you are right on top of him. Kick him off the edge and run around. Simple.[/QUOTE] GOD DAMN IT! WHY DID I NOT THINK OF THAT? Seriously though, those two archers would make a seriously funny video. I would make it myself, but my skills with flash are mediocre at best.

The animation is good but the voicing isn't, has no feeling to it.

Your voice needs more emoting, you sound kind of bored [editline]30th January 2012[/editline] break an octave