Got Logic Pro X for Christmas! I made a track that I'm pretty proud of!
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Figured I'd post it here and get some feedback (no pun intended >_>).
[url]https://soundcloud.com/blarghith/get-set-fixed[/url]
Eh, I'm not really liking the "timing" between the beat and the synth. Sounds a bit like you're trying to hard to make it sound different. The vocal part is nasally and very out of the mix as well.
Dynamically, it's very flatline. There's not a lot that really gives the listener something to pay attention to, which is another reason why the vocal section doesn't fit. I feel like it needs more atmosphere to glue it together, as you can very clearly define that the song is layered(I.E. it doesn't blend well).
But, I can't really give credit to my feedback because you just got Logic on Christmas. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and give you a follow, would like to hear what you've got in store once you learn the ropes a bit.
The percussion at the start wasn't that good, The percussion just after it was alright though.
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