• Gmod: A totally regular day for Bob
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My first machinima published on the allmighty internet. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSA0Bjj8_ms[/media] "This is Bob, he likes to chill at calm jazz-music on the TV. But when people is prank-calling him, he becomes outrageous. He also changes his mental state, as a person who is an INTERNET-freak. Mix that up with an incredibly awesome achievement, then you got a monster." Oh yeah, just registered on FP, wish me luck:)
This fucking sucked.
... i dont even know what to say...
Heaving pile of shit. Unfunny in all ways humanly possible featuring inclusion of retarded, aged meme.
So the age of an meme decides how bad a movie is? But as said before, it was my first machinima, and got made in a weekend.
Pretty good actually. Humor was okay but the editing and camera work was really awesome for your first machinima.
Your butt did some of the sound effects? :aaa:
Hey stop being an asshole to this guy. I think he's really good at this, he just needs some better jokes.
Your weak point is writing. Other than that, this is more decent than some of the 'first' videos I've seen people post.
I guess i'm biased in this one, but i agree to LOLSPYMOVIES I admit, the joke-part _was_ dry, but to be honest, it was just to test out the HD-quality on youtube. The "script" were made up at the spot, so i guess that made me burn a bit. In my opinion, i guess i need to get better on the script/jokes? Illuza: yes, but i edited it away, in fear of youtube censoring it away :3
I'd say better script too. The video itself seemed well done, but I really couldn't tell what was going on :/
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That wasn't that bad.
Better than a lot of the crap I've seen. I especially liked the camera work. As has been stated above however, the humor needs work. It wasn't funny. I will admit to laughing when he dropped the phone, thereby breaking the coffee table though.
You also need to turn on AA
It was mediocre until 0:30. Then it all went to shit
It was good for a first...
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