The Black World (Interactive) - General

This comic is about a man who got sucked into a black hole that shows the future. [URL=http://www.imagebee.net/][IMG]http://www.imagebee.net/images/7o124q0ry7xm6274fmp9.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.imagebee.net/][IMG]http://www.imagebee.net/images/6959biawgagmslkdcpl3.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.imagebee.net/][IMG]http://www.imagebee.net/images/s5rnuoeymbelp0h7eeko.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.imagebee.net/][IMG]http://www.imagebee.net/images/e3jwp1aw3ws7u63wsdni.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [b]A: Take the gun from the dead body and shoot the zombie[/b] [b]B: Enter the dead building.[/b]

[b]C: Commit suicide[/b]

Nice job telling us the plot twist before the story even began. B Also, you shouldn't make A or B and give more freedom to the people playing it.

fail you're horrible at drawing and don't give us much choice

[img]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/da2600blackworldsucks.png[/img]

I'm very sorry for this but your drawing is PURE crap. The reason I say this is because you're lines are all squiggly (seriously, look at the bench or the tree). And haven't we moved past caveman stickman drawings by now? Plus, how can buildings be "dead"? They were never alive.

Ahahaha, Agree red toaster. Also those drawings were no-effort 3 second shit. Seriously,but well just keep with story. C: Pick up the gun and go to the building.

Get out if you think its shitty all the comics are shitty just like the mspaint desc says. [editline]04:17PM[/editline] Thats the fuck it im not making this comic anymore because all you guys do is flame.

[QUOTE=John Fisher;16356086]Get out if you think its shitty all the comics are shitty just like the mspaint desc says. [editline]04:17PM[/editline] Thats the fuck it im not making this comic anymore because all you guys do is flame.[/QUOTE] Thank god.

I didn't flame (I'm nicer that way.) I just drew a better version of the opening :(

There's a difference between flames and constructive criticism, you dickweed. That was a flame, by the way.

I'm not a Dickweed either.

I know that, I'm talking to John Fisher.

Mmkay

[QUOTE=Joshua-029;16350137][img]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/da2600blackworldsucks.png[/img][/QUOTE] What the fuck did you use for making that pic? :D

MS Paint.

How the fuck did you make it look so good?

Practice makes perfect. That's actually a pretty quick drawing. [editline]09:13PM[/editline] I also saved as PNG

[QUOTE=John Fisher;16364473]How the fuck did you make it look so good?[/QUOTE] Read some of the other* interactive adventure threads. A little effort goes a long way. *My forest one (I'm more subtle when using asterisks.)