This is my new videos series, check it out and gimme feed back.
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5BSeFaMeyaE[/url]
how do i put the youtube video on the post?
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And you could make the video a little more exciting.
Your-voice-is-so-dull-and-monotone.
You have a slight lisp.
Are you Microsoft Sam's son?
trippel bareld deagle wif liek gold on it.
This was incredibly poorly done, it sounds like you're reading something just as you're about to kill yourself.
Also, don't explain what you're going to do before you do it, it's pointless, time consuming and frustrating. Watch real video reviews and see how they do it.
Two Notes, A Sniper is the man firing, sniper rifle is the weapon itself. Never call the gun the person. Two, Its the L96 Arctic Warfare not AWP
Yeah i noticed im like "dah dah dah" the whole time. Thanks for your feedback, and I cant believe i made the gun mistake, I pride myself on knowing my guns. I might remake, but how did I do explaining what the mod is and the it's effects?
Did I use enough weapons, i tried to use knifes, explosives, snipers. and SMGs. I guess i forgot HMG's...
Is the footage any good, or do i need to reshoot?
O and the lisp and shitty sound wuality is because my mic=ass.
"And after I shoot the good doctor in the face, his head will go flying across the map." Oh god. And your voice makes it hilarious.
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Also how did the arm come off. That never happens with me. The part would usually just explode into blood.
Its gibsplat, not dismemberment mod 1.9. And I idk how the arm camr off, but the head was a couple hundred feet away. And yeah, my voice sounds like a depressed transgendered crossdressing drag queen smokin uber pot about to jump off a building onto an awesome deathspike.
tansgendered crossdressing cancels out drag queen except in this rant. lol
That was not a review.
A review analyses and critiques work, this video was "I like GibSplat, watch me shoot NPC's with CS:S SWEPs for a bit"
The only part that came close was your comment that the pistol should not be capable of causing the dismemberment. (which I will agree with, it's a valid point)
Where's the 1st complaint you SHOULD have mentioned, the obvious lack of blood present? And what about some sort of final score, or at least a summary?
If you really intend to carry on doing "reviews", go and see what a review actually entails.
Also, I would suggest you review a variety of mods, not just stuff you like or hate.
And a minor point, but I don't see a need for you to use only CS:S weapons. It portrays you as the type that obsesses over Counter Strike, and that attaches a certain stigma.
Well, its a new computer, and since i dont have a ton of mods installed yet, then i decided to review some. I am gonna review one at a time, but i just rushed through this. I could have sworn that i mentioned the lack of blood when the gibs fly off, but I know I put the over all 8/10 thing in the description. And I am gonna to review popular mods from the Gmod.org homepage.
You should try reviewing gamemodes.
Dude.
You killed Breen.
Not cool.
You sound really excited about knives. :v:
lol yeah, THEY CUT THROUGH THE NPC'S LIKE CHEESE. lol
[QUOTE=jake2270;21119181]lol yeah, THEY CUT THROUGH THE NPC'S LIKE CHEESE. lol[/QUOTE]
I lol'ed at that moment.
yeah i HAVE to remake this.
ohwow. Someone who makes my voice sound like it has emotion :D
Read this phrase out loud in your next video.
"soi soi soi soi soi"
why?
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