Alas the Wraith, or as i would call her my pooor sweet lenoree.
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[B]She once was my poor sweet lenoreee, now a monster, forevermoreee.
She has the attack of a tendrill, but with many more tentacles.
But being the most intelligent of the zombies she can control them to her will
She can tell them to advance on the enemy, and when to break.
She is there master, and they her slaves.
Forever More. My poor sweet lenore. A monster forevermore....................
Beautiful in everyway, but now fused with a virus that kills her more in everyday.
Alas, her beauty fades, so she loses moreee of what makes her my pooor sweet lenoreee.
My life is the same, nevermore, for i couldn't protect my poor sweer lenore........................[/B]
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This poem is just a close imitation of Edgar Allan Poe's [i]The Raven[/i].
In [i]The Raven[/i], the narrator also reminisces about his "Lenore" and how she is gone, and it has the same rhyme scheme with every verse ending in something that rhymes with "more".
It's a poem about slenderman?
It's adorable!
I agree with xDarkFieldx, though, if you are going to do it then do it. Rip Poe off well.
Side note:
I made this and sold them at book signings
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You could do some original illustrations for your poem and find a way to make money off of it.
I didn't really like it, the verses seemed too long and musically incoherent to flow well.
Then again, I'm a literary idiot.
Also, you wrote "there" instead of "their" on the 5th verse.
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