Hey guy's
I'm looking for some feedback on my latest series called OUTLAST NOIR
I would really appreciate some constructive criticism.
Episode 1
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DTvJLEZbzGI[/url]
Episode 2
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAqgKnDrs3k[/url]
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oh man
Not bad, voice acting could've been better, though.
[QUOTE=Blazedol;43565917]Not bad, voice acting could've been better, though.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for watching!, Yeah first episode was a bit hit and miss I didn't record the audio in one go and had issues maintaining an accent, which is why in episode 2 and onwards I decided to go for a more mild accent
You should try to talk from your chest, your voice is kinda nasally. I have a nasally voice too and talking from your chest reduces that and makes it easier to understand what you're saying.
[QUOTE=Foogooman;43566797]You should try to talk from your chest, your voice is kinda nasally. I have a nasally voice too and talking from your chest reduces that and makes it easier to understand what you're saying.[/QUOTE]
An interesting suggestion, You mean just try talking deeper in general?
Imagine pushing the air from you stomach/chest out through your mouth instead of pulling the air from your chest with your throat.
It's hard to explain but that's the best way I could come up with it.
[QUOTE=iggy650;43567701]Imagine pushing the air from you stomach/chest out through your mouth instead of pulling the air from your chest with your throat.
It's hard to explain but that's the best way I could come up with it.[/QUOTE]
Thanks! I'll look into it any suggested guides other then Google.
[url]http://youtu.be/GHf2SgbTg3Q[/url]
Hey Guy's!
Episode 3 is now LIVE!,
Again I hope to have improved with this one ;)
this is pretty cool, unlike 99% of lets plays that are just the same thing with a different person this actually has something original in it.
[QUOTE=Grimleyblack;43571825][url]http://youtu.be/GHf2SgbTg3Q[/url]
Hey Guy's!
Episode 3 is now LIVE!,
Again I hope to have improved with this one ;)[/QUOTE]
huge improvement
[QUOTE=MisterSjeiks;43572122]this is pretty cool, unlike 99% of lets plays that are just the same thing with a different person this actually has something original in it.
huge improvement[/QUOTE]
Awww Thanks man, I'm really glad people actually enjoy watching this enough to wanna keep watching. The feedback I've received so far has been very helpful and I hope to keep making the series.
