I was seriously considering not posting here, but why not. I've been doing a Let's Play for the past month and I'd like to see what you guys think.
Here is the most recent part, me at my finest.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rusrQBDqwsM[/media]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL353C56A09ECEE197&feature=plcp]The whole playlist can be found here[/url]
I'm focusing entirely on improvement, so tell me if anything is bad. Thanks.
You spend so much time just dying. And you're talking just abit too much, and when you do talk it's abit "blabbery".
Writing these as they come:
Your microphone isn't that great. Invest in a better one if you have a chance.
The savestate message is a bit bothering. So is the speedup. Try to avoid using these or hide the savestate save and load messages. It's not that I dislike you using savestates, but there's a lot of messages popping up which can distract the watcher.
You don't react that much to dying which can detach the commentary from the gameplay. You also are very casual with your commentary in general which can be bad. It's more of a "I'm playing and talking about random things".
Yes, we can hear your buttons clicking.
All in all nothing inherently wrong with it. It's just sorta boring which is why I personally didn't get any interest in it.
Thanks for the feedback. This is my first lp and I'm just getting started.
Deserves a retsuplay
[QUOTE=Gprimeisback;34533632]Deserves a retsuplay[/QUOTE]
Please tell me that's a good thing.
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