alright .. as usual doin the whole practice thing.. also workin on somethin big on the side.. but one of my practice pieces came out pretty cool lookin. so here you go..
[img]http://www.deviantart.com/download/129664790/Practice_Muscle_Speed_paint_by_TrueWolf.png[/img]
speed paint around 40-50 mins (not really sure).. some references were used to help better understand the male muscle anatomy... (also borrowed a really kick ass anatomy book from a friend, and it's insane xD ) and i like this style.. i might be makin more lookin like this. :3:
Good job man. Although the boxers look oddly like flab.
hmm.. lol thanks, i wasn't really concentrating on the pants/boxers/hands.. i was tryin to get a good grasp of his muscle.. i think i could've detailed up the biceps though... also. nice edit.. (it was goin behind his legs :3:)
I was scrolled down half way so the empty space between his arm and body looked like his arm. And if see it that way, it looks like his hand is going somewhere.
Looks good. The only real critique I'd offer up is to accentuate his collarbone a bit more by deepening the dimples where it meets the deltoids/pectorals and the sternocleidomastoids (Fuck, I love that name). It'll help give the required depth he needs around his neck.
I think it's pretty good. You take classes? Or pure home training?
updated with a prettier version :3:
although i think the outline might be a bit too much.. i don't feel like goin back into ps for today :P
thx opethrockr for the critique, i think i kinda got what you said.. i'll darken the depth points of where the collarbones endpoints..
also, joxalot.. used to be home training, now i study at art school.
Looks great.
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Critique:
- thin down the outline
- put some more detail in his hands
Something looks a bit disproportionate, I don't know what.
And his haircut is :psyduck:
[QUOTE=Galago;16067828]Looks great.
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Critique:
- thin down the outline
- put some more detail in his hands[/QUOTE]
thanks.. i toned down the outline, and i didn't really add detail to his hands, but at least i made them not blank now :)
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bldgymngy, if you mind, when figure it out, lemme know :P
Woah, that's a pretty nice picture you have there. Good work, maybe make his eyes a bit more realistic next time (Unless you were going for that surreal feel)
thx.. and yeah.. i inverted the eye, puipil and white part.
His right hand looks wrong. Too bent
i believe it could be the wrist bending too much. :D thank you.
I'd say the abs look a little too big compared to the chest. Looks a bit like he has odd patches of fatness on his stomach.
His wrist is all weird and floppy.
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