me and my friend filmed this in one day in a rush due to a really short deadline, just thought i'd post it here for feedback before i give it in tomorrow, it's not great at all but i'm pretty confident about my grade since everyone else in my class had to film with shitty school cameras and edit with windows movie maker :v:
also note it looks a lot better in HD or whatever
[video=youtube;FpQ0ld5Ppnk]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FpQ0ld5Ppnk[/video]
Did your friend attend the Keanu Reeves School of Acting?
[QUOTE=mak13two;44292896]Did your friend attend the Keanu Reeves School of Acting?[/QUOTE]
he hates being on camera but he's prettier than me so i forced him
Can you do a Dear Sister edit for the ending?
[QUOTE=AimlessGiant;44293102]Can you do a Dear Sister edit for the ending?[/QUOTE]
is it the silly deagle sound that gives that vibe?
by no means perfect but punchy and fun and i liked your use of sound effects
no Wilhelm scream after the gun shot 0/10
Sound effects were solid. The camera angles were a little messy at times and the establishing shot was out of place (It should have been the opening shot) but other than that, good work.
I kind of see what you were doing showing the film from both perspectives, but I feel like the third person shots add to the confusion of what you're aiming for.
And turn down the image stabilization a bit, it's too distorting
took some feedback into account, tweaked it a little, i'll post it after school :downs:
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