Dubstep (kind of?) song me and my brother made. Need some opinions.

[Mumblecrust]

I would like some opinions because we don't have much experience with dubstep nor FL Studio. We kind of made this song to learn the program and would love to hear some opinions that hold more weight than our nonmusically inclined friends on Facebook. Any criticism is welcome. Thanks.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/paxromana/rhombus[/media]

[hoodoo456]

That was pretty good, but I think it would sound better if it had more of an up-tempo beat.

[killa101]

The kick definitely needs to be much louder. And as a fellow FL studio'er, first thing I will say is not to use the default drum samples. But as a positive, the synths were done rather well, and if you follow those couple of points, your track would sound much better imo.

[Croix]

The synth's are pretty awesome, and I love the melody. This is a fairly good song, but yeah, deffo don't use default drums.

[Feralicous]

I really like the synths, and the kick/snares are fine, but that hi-hat really ruins it.

[raccoon2112]

Awesome, but the drums really need more weight.

[editline]24th March 2011[/editline]

All you've got to do is swap out the samples, really

[FFStudios]

do you have the XXL version?